Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Chapter 12; part three"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from Magic Wand
Great visuals, action packed and suspenseful,just like the rest of the chapters. Take care so you can finish it off in the impeccable style you've showm thus far. The characters have remained true in the story thoughout. This is a very good action story,.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2010
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Great visuals, action packed and suspenseful,just like the rest of the chapters. Take care so you can finish it off in the impeccable style you've showm thus far. The characters have remained true in the story thoughout. This is a very good action story,.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Sarah Bearer
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I am only 10 but that was a really nice and good story, I wish to see more of your work so thanks for writing that, I really did like it so I am going to give a 6 star rating because it was just so good and yours is proubly one of the best story's I have ever read and I wish I could write just like that but I'm only 10!!!!!!!!!!!
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I am only 10 but that was a really nice and good story, I wish to see more of your work so thanks for writing that, I really did like it so I am going to give a 6 star rating because it was just so good and yours is proubly one of the best story's I have ever read and I wish I could write just like that but I'm only 10!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and enthusiam. I appreciate it.
Comment from Gungalo
This is a great chapter and not too bogged down with details that would make it drag. Love the rescue scene and the hospital one. Her mom really didn't need to know the details did she? Sigh, great write you!!!
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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This is a great chapter and not too bogged down with details that would make it drag. Love the rescue scene and the hospital one. Her mom really didn't need to know the details did she? Sigh, great write you!!!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
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Thoroughly enjoying your write!!!!
Comment from Lekatt
Continued great writing, I have been following it for a while and I like it. Really good writing and emotions. I like the book it's really good.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Continued great writing, I have been following it for a while and I like it. Really good writing and emotions. I like the book it's really good.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Dave M
Merry Christmas, Barbara.
I thoroughly enjoyed this read, especially how, once they were safely in the hospital, Cassie was more overawed with the adventure of it all than anyone else.
To be honest about it, I like reading action. I couldn't find anything to criticize. But take care of yourself. A virus at a time like this could be really serious.
Dave
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Merry Christmas, Barbara.
I thoroughly enjoyed this read, especially how, once they were safely in the hospital, Cassie was more overawed with the adventure of it all than anyone else.
To be honest about it, I like reading action. I couldn't find anything to criticize. But take care of yourself. A virus at a time like this could be really serious.
Dave
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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MERRY CHIRSTMAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you for your kind review. This is a romance, so I need to get to the romance part of it.
Comment from joannesnow
Very well written easy to follow and most dramatic. Your characters come to life and I see Joe as somewhat of a hero. Your writing presents great imagery and intense drama. Hope you are recovering and have a most joyous Christmas and the best of New Years.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Very well written easy to follow and most dramatic. Your characters come to life and I see Joe as somewhat of a hero. Your writing presents great imagery and intense drama. Hope you are recovering and have a most joyous Christmas and the best of New Years.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your well wishes and the kind review.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Blessings on you for continuing to post in spite of your condition - HOWEVER, listen to the doctor and REST!! This chapter is wonderful, and I'm looking forward to the rest. Have a wonderful Christmas. ~patty~
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Blessings on you for continuing to post in spite of your condition - HOWEVER, listen to the doctor and REST!! This chapter is wonderful, and I'm looking forward to the rest. Have a wonderful Christmas. ~patty~
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your review and kind advice. I will do my best to take it.
Comment from eliz100
This was a great read from beginning to end, as usual. The tempo of this chapter matched the activity in this chapter very well.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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This was a great read from beginning to end, as usual. The tempo of this chapter matched the activity in this chapter very well.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Barbara ...
I always enjoy reading the chapters of your interesting story and the 6th star award is mainly for your courage, in spite of what you are facing right now.
Rest and sleep are great tonics and being at home for Christmas is certainly more restful than in a busy Hospital.
There is just one suggestion to make ...
* In two places, you have mom ... and I suggest Mom.
I take this opportunity of wishing you and your loved-ones a Happy & Holy Christmas and God's richest blessings during the year that lies ahead.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Hullo Barbara ...
I always enjoy reading the chapters of your interesting story and the 6th star award is mainly for your courage, in spite of what you are facing right now.
Rest and sleep are great tonics and being at home for Christmas is certainly more restful than in a busy Hospital.
There is just one suggestion to make ...
* In two places, you have mom ... and I suggest Mom.
I take this opportunity of wishing you and your loved-ones a Happy & Holy Christmas and God's richest blessings during the year that lies ahead.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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I will check those areas. Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from The Stranger
well I am sort of confused but I believe i am correct in citing Joe as a hero who will go to any length to save the girls from their torment
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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well I am sort of confused but I believe i am correct in citing Joe as a hero who will go to any length to save the girls from their torment
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Yes, Joe is the hero in this novel. Thank you for your kind review.