Another Pretty Face
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Comment from patmedium
you have racked up the tension with a really BIG ratchet here, Barbara. Congratulations on a really good, strong, stress-filled section. xxx
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2010
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you have racked up the tension with a really BIG ratchet here, Barbara. Congratulations on a really good, strong, stress-filled section. xxx
Comment Written 07-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and your support. You are wonderful.
Comment from Matoshka
There is always so much action in your story. I find myself holding my breath as the dialogue is so true to life. This last chapter really leaves us sitting on our hands waiting for the next chapter. Good luck and prayers with your Chemo, God Bless you. I enjoyed this so much.
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There is always so much action in your story. I find myself holding my breath as the dialogue is so true to life. This last chapter really leaves us sitting on our hands waiting for the next chapter. Good luck and prayers with your Chemo, God Bless you. I enjoyed this so much.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
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You are so very welcome. Blessings.
Comment from KayteeF
Hi Barbara, this is certainly an action packed chapter, keeping me glued to the screen whilst reading it.
I am short of breath at all the excitement.
I am glad to see that Sarah managed to tell Joe she loves him, but I don't think he heard her.
As long as George manages to distract Sarah by the painting, hopefully she wont be too stressed.
Great work friend.
I did wonder how you had the energy to do all this writing, so now I know and a good idea to have the story ready before starting to post.
Glad to know that you have managed to keep going this long with the Chemotherapy. Are you still feeling the tiredness?
Will be keeping you in my prayers this Thursday.
Thank you for keeping up the postings.
Cathleen
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2010
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Hi Barbara, this is certainly an action packed chapter, keeping me glued to the screen whilst reading it.
I am short of breath at all the excitement.
I am glad to see that Sarah managed to tell Joe she loves him, but I don't think he heard her.
As long as George manages to distract Sarah by the painting, hopefully she wont be too stressed.
Great work friend.
I did wonder how you had the energy to do all this writing, so now I know and a good idea to have the story ready before starting to post.
Glad to know that you have managed to keep going this long with the Chemotherapy. Are you still feeling the tiredness?
Will be keeping you in my prayers this Thursday.
Thank you for keeping up the postings.
Cathleen
Comment Written 07-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2010
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Yes, fatigue and chemo seem to be the same word. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Babibrn
AS USUAL YOU HAVE GREAT WRITING AND YOUR CHARACTERS WORK WELL TOGETER. YOU HAVE A GOOD GUMPTION ON YOUR STORIES. DO YOU TAKE THEM FROM IDEAS O ACTUAL LIFE?JUST A QUESTION. IF IT MATTERS I LIKE YOUR STUFF.
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AS USUAL YOU HAVE GREAT WRITING AND YOUR CHARACTERS WORK WELL TOGETER. YOU HAVE A GOOD GUMPTION ON YOUR STORIES. DO YOU TAKE THEM FROM IDEAS O ACTUAL LIFE?JUST A QUESTION. IF IT MATTERS I LIKE YOUR STUFF.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2010
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I did read in a newspaper about a similiar incendent. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from eliz100
This was a great read from beginning to end, as usual. The action and suspense are very realistic. I look forward to the next chapter.
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This was a great read from beginning to end, as usual. The action and suspense are very realistic. I look forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Judi
Dear Barbara,
What an absolutely brave soul you are, writing in the midst of your own person turmoil. I will pray for your recovery from this moment on.
Your story was so very compelling; and even though I have not read the entire work, I did go back and read chapter 26 to get some feel for what was going on. I intend to read the entire story, it is so well written, as everything falls into place so smoothly.
I believe you have a beautiful chance of this becoming a best-selling novel, and I will put in some prayers for that to happen as well.
Your fight to 'fight your own monster', is heart rendering with this work. It is fantastic.
Get well very soon, and may God watch over you.
PS The six stars are NOT due to your struggle, but due to you excellent skill! Judi
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2010
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Dear Barbara,
What an absolutely brave soul you are, writing in the midst of your own person turmoil. I will pray for your recovery from this moment on.
Your story was so very compelling; and even though I have not read the entire work, I did go back and read chapter 26 to get some feel for what was going on. I intend to read the entire story, it is so well written, as everything falls into place so smoothly.
I believe you have a beautiful chance of this becoming a best-selling novel, and I will put in some prayers for that to happen as well.
Your fight to 'fight your own monster', is heart rendering with this work. It is fantastic.
Get well very soon, and may God watch over you.
PS The six stars are NOT due to your struggle, but due to you excellent skill! Judi
Comment Written 07-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your encouraging words and the kind review.
Comment from The Stranger
an interesting story, I did lose thread slightly between the painting of the house and the relevance of the helicopter crew but nonetheless, a good read
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2010
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an interesting story, I did lose thread slightly between the painting of the house and the relevance of the helicopter crew but nonetheless, a good read
Comment Written 07-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Readywriter52
Joe is determined to stop the kidnappers and get Cassie. He seems willing to risk his life. I know if they let the kidnapper fly away with the girls, they will never see them again. He has to get the girls away from their kidnappers.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2010
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Joe is determined to stop the kidnappers and get Cassie. He seems willing to risk his life. I know if they let the kidnapper fly away with the girls, they will never see them again. He has to get the girls away from their kidnappers.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2010
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I hope Joe and the girls can get out safely.
Comment from Paradox Tremors
I think you have done an excellent job with this chapter. The action ran smoothly and believably well. I hope you will get better and continue to write my friend.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2010
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I think you have done an excellent job with this chapter. The action ran smoothly and believably well. I hope you will get better and continue to write my friend.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Gungalo
Wow, talk about action!!! This episode is packed to the gills with it. Seems the plan didn't work so now i wonder what is going to happen Don't think those guys holding the girls are just gonna hand them over, that's for sure. What a write!!! Can't wait to read the next one girl!!!
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2010
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Wow, talk about action!!! This episode is packed to the gills with it. Seems the plan didn't work so now i wonder what is going to happen Don't think those guys holding the girls are just gonna hand them over, that's for sure. What a write!!! Can't wait to read the next one girl!!!
Comment Written 06-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
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My pleasure, Barbara!!!