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A collection of poems

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Nature's scenes provide us with some imaginative landscapes and vivid colours and your poem brought the scenes to life here with your unusual descriptions and appreciation, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    Thank you so much Dolly. I appreciate your kind review your time. And a great rating, too. I hope your holidays are amazing and your days.As well!
Comment from ESOSTINE
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This poem, 'The Nature of Mother', creatively describes a beautiful scene of nature, harbouring all kinds of creatures that adds to the colour of the surrounding earth and sky. I truly enjoy every bit of the poem and its gentle flow. Well done, my friend.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    Thank you very much. I'm really pleased that you like it. My first kick at the can. It's not something I normally write to. So I'm sure there's some errors in there. However, failure is not really failure. It's just one way that you know doesn't work kinda like a scientist. Thanks so much again.I hope you have a wonderful holiday and your evenings.Great too!
Comment from DonandVicki
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You painted a very vivid picture of Mother Nature. I am no expert but the meter, syllable count all seem right to me. The painting reminds me of a maxfield Parrish.

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 Comment Written 17-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    Thank you so much.I'm really glad you like this! This is my first kick at the cat never really written one of these types of palms. So I'm sure there's mistakes. However, having said that, it is not a failure if I fail, it's just simply a way that does it work kinda like a scientist. Thank you again. I hope you have a great holiday. Is that you nights are great too!