Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Roy,
This poem reminds us that kindness and understanding are needed to move a child forward with strong self assurance. Bulling, name calling and undermining a child scars for life and needs to stop. It can lead to the blood you mention because of suicide.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful rest of the day and weekend.
Joan

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 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024

Thanks Joan, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from Cindy Decker 3

Excellent

Roy,
This is a wonderful heart-felt poem.
It reminds me of the war in Gaza. Children on both sides are scarred by this bloodbath; they'll grow up hating the other side and what does that say for the world's future.
Children are indeed the world's wealth.
Excellent poem, Roy.
Blessings,
Have a nice Spring day,
Cindy

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 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024

Thanks Cindy, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy