Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a well written 575 for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. Your presentation is lovely and I also wish for you a very good week. May God bless. Patricia.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024

Thank you for your kind review.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your poem is so tender! I love how the weeping willows seeem to share the the emotions of the heart. The idea of salty tears drifting downstream is so sad. II could feel the emotions in your poem. It left me with a sense of longing. Really lovely work!

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024

Thank you so very much for the kind words and review.

Comment from pome lover

Excellent

well, that's a sad one, all right, "tears drifting down stream."
And a Lovely (perfect) picture to accompany your good 5-7-5 poem.
Best of luck in the contest.
Katharine

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 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024

Thank you Katharine, you are very kind. Don

reply by pome lover on 16-Oct-2024

you are most welcome.