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Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Leaving Rebekah"Two very real women in not so real situation.
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Comment from Wayne Fowler
Nicely done. But couldn't you at least smack her brains against the side glass? You and Rachelle are far too kind and polite to Jane. I'm quite sure I would have slapped her hand (hard) off the radio button. "It's rude to play the radio when the back seat passengers can't hear it, and any louder and the driver can't safely operate the 'borrowed' vehicle."
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Nicely done. But couldn't you at least smack her brains against the side glass? You and Rachelle are far too kind and polite to Jane. I'm quite sure I would have slapped her hand (hard) off the radio button. "It's rude to play the radio when the back seat passengers can't hear it, and any louder and the driver can't safely operate the 'borrowed' vehicle."
Best wishes.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Jane will get her come uppance. Hopefully, it will change her for the better. Time will tell. Gretchen
Comment from patcelaw
Another well written chapter, and I enjoyed listening to it. I wish you the very best with the story the story is moving along. I hope there's an end into it at some point.
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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Another well written chapter, and I enjoyed listening to it. I wish you the very best with the story the story is moving along. I hope there's an end into it at some point.
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Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you are enjoying this. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
Yes, although we might entertain a disastrous thought to happen to someone, we entertain the thought, but thinking of the outcomes of that thought might not turn out well for anyone, so hopefully we dismiss, I have always had an active alter ego, which has kept me in reasonable health, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Yes, although we might entertain a disastrous thought to happen to someone, we entertain the thought, but thinking of the outcomes of that thought might not turn out well for anyone, so hopefully we dismiss, I have always had an active alter ego, which has kept me in reasonable health, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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I have an imaginary me who extracts retribution but only in my imagination. Lol. Keeps me out of a lot of trouble. Gretchen
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Comment from Rachelle Allen
GENIUS, GENIUS, GENIUS, GENIUS, GENIUS!!! I know I say this every week, but I also MEAN it every week: this is my favorite chapter of yours YET!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!
The set-up about Southern You is so perfect! And I love the way you counter it with thoughts of slamming the brakes and catapulting our delightful Jaaaaaaaaane through the windshield. The Jersey boys would actually love THAT side of you, too! They're quite visceral that way!
And Jane's favorite song?? OF COURSE it would be the unbearably obnoxious "Hey Mickey!!" Of course it would!!! Honestly, you are SOOO freakin hilarious every moment of your life!!!
This is a bona fide masterpiece. It honestly is. SOOO exceptionally good!!
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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GENIUS, GENIUS, GENIUS, GENIUS, GENIUS!!! I know I say this every week, but I also MEAN it every week: this is my favorite chapter of yours YET!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!
The set-up about Southern You is so perfect! And I love the way you counter it with thoughts of slamming the brakes and catapulting our delightful Jaaaaaaaaane through the windshield. The Jersey boys would actually love THAT side of you, too! They're quite visceral that way!
And Jane's favorite song?? OF COURSE it would be the unbearably obnoxious "Hey Mickey!!" Of course it would!!! Honestly, you are SOOO freakin hilarious every moment of your life!!!
This is a bona fide masterpiece. It honestly is. SOOO exceptionally good!!
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Why, bless your heart, darlin'. Lol. I didn't want to regurgitate your scene, and since we were stuck in the car, I thought what obnoxious trait would she have? Singing, loud, off key and making sure every eye in the joint was on her. Attention whore. Can't wait to see what we come up with next week.
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This was absolutely PRICELESS, though!!! It's actually a good thing we don't live near each other. The world is simply not ready for that. I love your sense of humor and the absurd so very much!! You are a treasure in my life. xoxox