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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Debi, you did such a wonderful job it made me tear up. You are right about her, she helped me a lot when I was new, especially the rhymed poetry and she was always so respectful. Well done!

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
    Gypsy, please forgive me for this late response for your kind review and comments. Also thank you so much for the generous gift of six stars. I truly appreciate you so much. Thanks again, my sweet friend.
Comment from aryr
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This was a wonderful remembrance of Jan and Abby, I loved her sitting on the swing with Abby at her side. It showed that she loved everyone within her realm. Blessings n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    Thank you so very much, Alie, for the lovely comments on Jan's poem. She, too, would have appreciated them. Thanks again, my dear friend
reply by aryr on 27-Nov-2023
    You are so very welcome, Debi.
Comment from GWHARGIS
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This was probably one of the sweetest things I've ever read. I was thinking about her the other day. Her stories anmbou her sister and her brother Tim were my favorite. The paranormal studies were very cool. Great job. Gretchen

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    Thank you so very much, Gretchen, for the lovely comments on Jan's poem. She, too, would have appreciated them. Thanks again, my dear friend
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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This is truly a very sweet verse, Debi, and a fine tribute to dear Jan. It's certainly a lovely image of her sitting with Abby on a star. Well done and thanks for sharing and remembering an obviously very special lady! Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    Thank you so very much, Debbie, for the lovely comments on Jan's poem. She, too, would have appreciated them. Thanks again, my dear friend
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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When I was taking care of my beloved husband, Jan passed away. She would help me a lot, too. She was the kind of person who kept us on track while we were on Fan Story, how I miss her.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
    Oh Rosemary, I had no idea that your husband had died. If anyone posted anything, I didn't see it. And if I would have known, I would have posted it. This has to be so hard for you and I my heart is breaking for you and of course, here come the tears. Because you have always been so special to me. Would it be ok if I wrote a little something for you after Thanksgiving? Also, I don't think I have your birthday down??? Please accept my late condolences with deepest sympathy.

    I feel so bad I don't know where I was at. Oh, yeah, I do want to thank you for your kind and caring comments for Jan. God Bless, my friend and thank you for those lovely extra stars. We will dedicate them in honor of your husband and Jan.
reply by Rosemary Everson1 on 22-Nov-2023
    Debi, please keep it to yourself for a while. It has been a little over a month, our family must get through the holidays; it's not going to be easy. Your comforting words in your comments are enough. Thank you.
reply by Rosemary Everson1 on 22-Nov-2023
    Don't feel bad, you didn't know because I haven't mentioneded our loss to many writers. Thank you for always being so kind.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
    Whatever you say. But Im here for you if you need me, ok? I'm so happy hour back but feel helpless. I'm glad you have family
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Debi,
This a heartfelt and well done poem honoring Jan on her birthday, even though she recently left us so unexpectedly. She of course is reading this right now and is enjoying the words and the artwork.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a Happy Thanksgiving.
Joan

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    Thank you so very much, Joan, for the lovely comments on Jan's poem. She, too, would have appreciated them. Thanks again, my dear friend
reply by dragonpoet on 27-Nov-2023
    You are most welcome, Debi.
    Joan
Comment from Jacob1395
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Jan does sound like someone who was really special, and I'm sad to hear that she's no longer with us, but it's clear that she touched the lives of many. A well written piece Debbie.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    Thank you so very much, Jacob, for the lovely comments on Jan's poem. She, too, would have appreciated them. Thanks again, my dear friend
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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So beautiful in words and in sentiment to remember Jan's first birthday in heaven.
Great thought to think of her and Abby together playing.

Best wishes
Mary

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    Thank you so very much, Mary, for the lovely comments on Jan's poem. She, too, would have appreciated them. Thanks again, my dear friend
Comment from Navada
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This is a lovely tribute to your friend, accompanied by a moving visual image. I liked the references to astronomy and the support of veterans which gave us a sense of her interests. One of the things that struck me was the picture of the little cat sitting beside her owner - a faithful little companion. It has the same coloured fur as my dearly departed precious little puddy cat. Thank you for the share.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
    Hi Navada, after reading all your kind words I went to editing and explained that Jan was from here and she had a cat that was much like a child to her. We never did hear what happened to Abby. Anyway, thanks so much for another lovely review. Have a blessed day tomorrow! Love, Debi
reply by Navada on 22-Nov-2023
    Thank you for that. I can completely relate. My Sally was my fur baby. I hope Abby found another suitably loving home.
Comment from nomi338
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I swear Deb, you are among the best. Your growing skill at turning a clever phrase continues to amaze me. Anyone following your upward strides towards poetic greatness has to admit that you are displaying amazing talents. Congratulations.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    My dearest Nomi, I know that Jan would have been touched by your kind words for her and me, just as I am. Thank you my sweet BBB! Love, Debi