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Nov. 2023 Letter to God

Letter to God expressing my concerns.

35 total reviews 
Comment from lyenochka
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This is such a beautiful prayer, Beth! I love that you start with humble confession, then you move on to ask the Lord for what you need to change to help the world. You conclude with an acceptance that this is the condition that He told us about millennia ago and you ask for the ability to love more - fulfilling exactly the command He gave us. Hope this does well in the contest! Virtual Six!!

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
    Thank you, Helen. I use just talk without in organization when addressing God. I just writing down a prayer helps get our thoughts in some sort of order. I appreciate your review.
    Beth
reply by lyenochka on 04-Nov-2023
    That's best when we just let our heart thoughts flow to the Lord! 💖
Comment from royowen
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Let Ike tell you I just came from reading a letter addressed to God from a fellow sister in the Lord, and it was dripping with confession of what we've conceived in sin, thank you for writing this equally confession and a fine and humble letter to our holy God, beautifully written Beth, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
    Thank you, Roy. I really appreciate the review of my prayer and your comments.
    Beth
reply by royowen on 04-Nov-2023
    Most welcome
Comment from Ulla
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No, one thing is for certain, none of us know what lies ahead of us. This is as far as it goes with me. As you probably know, I'm a non believer. But I still wanted to wish you the best of luck. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
    Thank you Ulla, I understand and respest your choice. At least we agree that it isn't for us to know what lies ahead. Thank your for the review. I'm glad we can connect as good friends no matter what we believe.
    Beth
    Beth.
reply by Ulla on 04-Nov-2023
    Absolutely! :))
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is an excellent entry for the Dear God contest. You have written clearly your own failings, but also what you hope from God in the current times of trouble. kay

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
    Thank you Kay. I really appreciate the review and your comments
    Beth
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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A well-heeled written testimony, and one that many are seeking answers for. I have come to recognize IF an answer doesn;t come that I like, it doesn;t mean He hasn't answered, but only that the time was m not right, or the request would do more harm than good. In any event, all fervent prayers are answered

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
    Thank you Tom. I appreciate the review. God answers prayer when we most need the answers. Sometimes he has to teach us patience.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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This is a superb prayer, and wonderfully written.
I'll never understand how people who see things so very differently than I can speak as if they pray to the same God as I. One of us ain't listening. I pray that it isn't me, and pray that they are doing the same.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
    Thank you Wayne. I see it the same way, but I hope you aren't isuggesting that your my opinions are so different. No two people are always on exactly the same page but when other's philosophy is diametrically opposite, I wonder how God sees it.
reply by Wayne Fowler on 04-Nov-2023
    Not at all. I believe we are pretty close.
Comment from damommy
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Dear Beth, you have everything I feel and sometimes think I fall short of telling Him because I lack the words. But you don't. This is a beautiful prayer and should be said every day by everyone. Good luck in the contest. I'm out of sixes and this deserves one, so please accept my heartfelt six.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
    Thank you so much for the review. My usual prayer aren't very well organized and not very reverant; Writing something down does help get your thoughts organized.
    Beth
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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Beth, I can tell by your words that you are a woman who prays regularly. This read like a prayer, full of concern, the desire to do what's right, and the trust you have that God will be there - in your life and in others' - when we ask that He is.

Our world is in true need of prayer right now.

Thank you for sharing this intimate letter.

xo
Pam

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
    Thank you Pam, I do talk to God a lot, but more like talking to a friend. Writing something down helps get your thoughts into some kind of order.
    Betj
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this letter to God contest entry. I could have written this prayer myself. It says exactly what's in my heart. I enjoyed reading and wish you the best of luck.

Give me patience, and help me to realize your timing is always perfect, (one of my problems)

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
    Thank you, Barbata. Patience is one of my many problems as well.
    I appreciate the review.
    Beth
Comment from Ric Myworld
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You know, we should all just back up, sit down, and take out a few minutes of every day to be thankful for everything good in our lives. Prayer truly is a miracle worker, if we just use it. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
    Thank you Ric. I'm sure we would all feel better about about our lives, if gave some thought to how many blessing we have in our lives. Thank you for the six stars.
    Beth