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Comment from Janet Foor
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So happy for your bright side Debi. Most times, that attitude works for me as well. Sometimes I need an attitude adjustment but that's what God and family are for.

Nicely done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2023
    Hi Janet, hahaha! I loved what you said about that is what family and God are for. I am laughing because I had just told someone that I didn't use children in my poem because sometimes I need to find a bright side when they try to tell me what they think I should do and act like the mom. Lol. And that isn't too often tho.

    I thank you so much for your awesome review and comments for my Bright Side poem. I needed a little pep talk of my own, so thought I'd take my best of friends here with me. Your kindness always means so much to me. Thanks again, dear friend.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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The poem, and the bright presentation, all serve to brighten our day, Debi. It gives us all something to think about when we are feeling down and depressed. I love you poem, my friend, it's so cheerful, and really does make me feel good. Well done!! :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2023
    Hi Sandra, you know girlfriend how much I think of you. So I thank you so much for your awesome review and comments for my Bright Side poem. I needed a little pep talk of my own, so thought I'd take my best of friends here with me. Your kindness always means so much to me. Thanks again, dear friend.
Comment from Anne Johnston
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I love it, Debi. You sound like a very up-beat person. I know you have been through a lot, and yet you always manage to put something on here to keep us looking for the bright side. I am so glad that when things do get hard, we just have to whisper the Name of Jesus, and He restores our joy.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2023
    Hi there Anne, you always say the sweetest things and I thank you so much for your awesome review and comments for my Bright Side poem. I needed a little pep talk of my own, so thought I'd take my best of friends here with me. Your kindness always means so much to me. I appreciate those extra stars too. Thanks again, dear friend.
Comment from MissMerri
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What a sunny, bright, positive and delightful poem! I loved it. I liked every verse, but my favorite is perhaps this one:
"To have some loyal, caring friends
Close on your team or squad
A prayerful heart whose kindness mends
Helps you stay close to God"
This is such a great description of what we often find here on FanStory... prayerful hearts, kindness, loyal, caring friends. Thank you so much for your perfectly wonderful poetic description of this unique phenomenon, Debi.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2023
    Hi Adonna, once again I thank you so much for your awesome review and comments for my Bright Side poem. I needed a little pep talk of my own, so thought I'd take my best of friends here with me. Your kindness always means so much to me. Thanks again, dear friend.
Comment from w.j.debi
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This is an inspirational verse. Looking on the bright side is certainly the best thing to do. It makes one's life happier and also that of anyone else they meet.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2023
    Hi Debi, I thank you so much for your awesome review and comments for my Bright Side poem. I needed a little pep talk of my own, so thought I'd take my best of friends here with me. Your kindness always means so much to me. Thanks again, dear friend.
Comment from BethShelby
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This is a great poem with a message we should all take to heart. Life is so much more worthwhile when we are not having a pity party. but counting our blessings and looking for the bright side. More everything you write is upbeat and just looking ar yoursmile I know you've had a lot of problems, but you always search for the bright side.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2023
    Hi there Beth, I thank you so much for your awesome review and comments for my Bright Side poem. I needed a little pep talk of my own, so thought I'd take my best of friends here with me. Your kindness always means so much to me. Thanks again, dear friend.
    One more thing Beth, have I asked you for your birthdate yet? I would love to do a poem for you when it comes around, as I do for my other best reviewers and friends. My way of saying thank you.
reply by BethShelby on 22-Jul-2023
    That sweet of you Debi but unnessary.
    It is Sept 10th but you have more important things to write about.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2023
    I have you on my list. Since I have been doing these birthday poems for my good friends here, I have noticed how much of a bright side for me to do them. When I hear someone smile (LOL, yes, I can hear smiles. Haha) I smile to days after, so I am so blessed myself by the thought of making someone else's day. I will contact you ahead of time for some info. Ok?
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this with us. I agree. We should look for our bright side. We are in charge of us, and we can choose to be happy or choose to be sad. Yes, sad things happen, but we can find a good in it.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2023
    Hi there Barb, yes, it is a choice we all make, and not always easy one.
    I thank you so much for your awesome review and comments for my Bright Side poem. I needed a little pep talk of my own, so thought I'd take my best of friends here with me. Your kindness always means so much to me. Thanks again, dear friend.
Comment from aryr
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This was a wonderful picture of the sun shining bright, Debi. I loved your poem which showed your anguish and your horror of being down. You mentioned your grandchildren bringing joy to your day. Blessings n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2023
    Hi Ali, my grandchildren bring me so much joy and are such a part of my bright side. I thank you so much for your awesome review and comments for my Bright Side poem. I needed a little pep talk of my own, so thought I'd take my best of friends here with me. Your kindness always means so much to me. Thanks again, dear friend.
reply by aryr on 22-Jul-2023
    Most welcome, Debi.
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
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Your poem is not just pretty words, but also great advice. Again, in your writing, you reveal your faith, your bright, happy disposition, and your love of family.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2023
    Hello there my sweet Verna, I thank you so much for your awesome review and comments for my Bright Side poem. I needed a little pep talk of my own, so thought I'd take my best of friends here with me. Your kindness always means so much to me. Thanks again, dear friend.
Comment from harmony13
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The author's words are so uplifting, energizing and creative. I feel this
author reminds us in details with instruction how to lift up our spirits when feeling down. The author's words brightened my day as my 6 year old grandson is here and brings so much joy! The artwork is awesome!
An exceptional poem! Hi Debi, have a great day!....Hugs, Maria

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2023
    0h Maria, I just can't thank you enough for always being so sweet. I appreciate you so much for your awesome review and comments for my Bright Side poem. I needed a little pep talk of my own, so thought I'd take my best of friends here with me. Your kindness always means so much to me. Thanks again, dear friend.