Bad Boy Ric
Lunch at the HotHouse, part two.35 total reviews
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is fun, Terry. I think Jennifer has a plan, and when Ric leaves she will go with him. LOL There's more than one way to
skin a cat! LOL Just a guess. Well done, looking forward to more. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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This is fun, Terry. I think Jennifer has a plan, and when Ric leaves she will go with him. LOL There's more than one way to
skin a cat! LOL Just a guess. Well done, looking forward to more. Nancy:)
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Nancy, Thank you for the six stars. I am delighted you are enjoying it so far. Two more to go. Terry
Comment from amahra
Nice of you to not make me wait for the part 2 of your next installment. Jennifer flashed her best smile, the one which doubled her tips, [Love this line.] Waiting for the next chapter.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Nice of you to not make me wait for the part 2 of your next installment. Jennifer flashed her best smile, the one which doubled her tips, [Love this line.] Waiting for the next chapter.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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A great review, thank you, the next one will be on the weekend. You are very kind, Terry.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You say this is fiction, and I know it is, but I'm sure our Ric will love the description of 'fictitious' Ric. (who knows, he might actually be the 'bad boy!) I love him anyway! Lol. I really enjoyed this one, and look forward to your next chapter. Well done! It's such a fun story. Love and hugs. Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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You say this is fiction, and I know it is, but I'm sure our Ric will love the description of 'fictitious' Ric. (who knows, he might actually be the 'bad boy!) I love him anyway! Lol. I really enjoyed this one, and look forward to your next chapter. Well done! It's such a fun story. Love and hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Sandra, thank you very much for the comments and for reading my story. I am pretty sure you will enjoy the next one. Terry.
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I can't wait! This has been a wonderful, unique, and fun story. I'm loving it. xxx
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Thanks, Terry for this entertaining tale of fiction. I enjoyed every minute of it. Ric being a guitar player and in a country rock band cinched my curiosity and kept me engaged throughout the piece. I used to play in a rock band myself. I played bass guitar and then the drum set and then moved up to front the band as the lead singer. I tried to make it for eleven years before giving up and going back to school to become a medical assistant. I joined the working world and left my band behind. I don't regret the years I played though...it was fun and I met many interesting people. Thanks for letting me share and for the enjoyable story.
Jesse
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Thanks, Terry for this entertaining tale of fiction. I enjoyed every minute of it. Ric being a guitar player and in a country rock band cinched my curiosity and kept me engaged throughout the piece. I used to play in a rock band myself. I played bass guitar and then the drum set and then moved up to front the band as the lead singer. I tried to make it for eleven years before giving up and going back to school to become a medical assistant. I joined the working world and left my band behind. I don't regret the years I played though...it was fun and I met many interesting people. Thanks for letting me share and for the enjoyable story.
Jesse
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Jesse, you are the second guy I heard from that use to do the band thing. I am delighted you enjoyed the story. Terry.
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Glad to hear it. I enjoyed the topic very much.
Jesse
Comment from karenina
Ha ha ha... Whoever might come to mind, pray tell!?
"Ric could love 'em dearly and leave 'em just as clearly."
Great saying! Nice gig if he can get a way with it!
"Oh...well, I bet she gets good tips" is a great throwback to the "tips" comment in part one...
"I wonder if he always has a three-day good beard?" Made me laugh out loud!
(How would one manage that!?)
"Comming in your direction, sweetie."-- I think you meant "coming."
Great banter! Very enjoyable read...
I hope Ric (no relation) and Jennifer make beautiful music together!!!
Karenina
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Ha ha ha... Whoever might come to mind, pray tell!?
"Ric could love 'em dearly and leave 'em just as clearly."
Great saying! Nice gig if he can get a way with it!
"Oh...well, I bet she gets good tips" is a great throwback to the "tips" comment in part one...
"I wonder if he always has a three-day good beard?" Made me laugh out loud!
(How would one manage that!?)
"Comming in your direction, sweetie."-- I think you meant "coming."
Great banter! Very enjoyable read...
I hope Ric (no relation) and Jennifer make beautiful music together!!!
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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LOL, great review as usual. Hang in there we will see what happens. Terry.
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You know I'll be ready for the next....
Comment from lyenochka
Ah, the plot thickens! The new kid in the story, Ric, could be in for a big surprise and maybe Jennifer might change his previous relationship patterns. Lots of fun jabs by the local regulars!
You might have already fixed these:
"Did I say bad, guy, ladies?" (no comma after 'bad')
"Comming in your direction, (Coming)
Hollis asks, "Ric what's the name of your band?" (comma after 'Ric')
"I asked her name, 'She said, Lulu.' ("I asked her name. She said, 'Lulu.'")
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Ah, the plot thickens! The new kid in the story, Ric, could be in for a big surprise and maybe Jennifer might change his previous relationship patterns. Lots of fun jabs by the local regulars!
You might have already fixed these:
"Did I say bad, guy, ladies?" (no comma after 'bad')
"Comming in your direction, (Coming)
Hollis asks, "Ric what's the name of your band?" (comma after 'Ric')
"I asked her name, 'She said, Lulu.' ("I asked her name. She said, 'Lulu.'")
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Helen, thank you for reading and catching the edits, got them changed. Thanks, Terry.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting post you have penned. You used very good dialogue and very good descriptive words. I look forward to reading the next part. Teri
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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This is a very interesting post you have penned. You used very good dialogue and very good descriptive words. I look forward to reading the next part. Teri
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Teri, thank you for reading, and for your review. Terry.
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Dang, I was hoping this wasn't going to be ending so soon. Lucky for me, there's a last call. Ric just reviewed my last post, and I'm a sucker for a good 'love story.'
If that is what's coming. I'm behind on thanking reviewers, but just had a feeling there was something here to catch, and I was right. Can't wait for last call. After all, I am kinda thirsty too! Lol
Thanks Terry! As usual, I love it!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Dang, I was hoping this wasn't going to be ending so soon. Lucky for me, there's a last call. Ric just reviewed my last post, and I'm a sucker for a good 'love story.'
If that is what's coming. I'm behind on thanking reviewers, but just had a feeling there was something here to catch, and I was right. Can't wait for last call. After all, I am kinda thirsty too! Lol
Thanks Terry! As usual, I love it!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Debi, I am delighted you are enjoying the story. We will see what happens. Terry.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
You are such an interesting person and whatever it is you select writing I think is it's parcel
Of his biography or a dream held in reserve but unfulfilled. Fact or fiction? You know but we are left holding the leash of A dog running free
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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You are such an interesting person and whatever it is you select writing I think is it's parcel
Of his biography or a dream held in reserve but unfulfilled. Fact or fiction? You know but we are left holding the leash of A dog running free
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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LOL, thank you Tom, I think! Terry.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Nice story. (Don't coincidences happen all the time? lol)
"and a cold Coors." - redundant? Back in my youth, when I drank, Coors was known nationwide as 'always' cold, shipped cold, kept cold.
"it wasn't like that she was a waitress at IHOP" - needs a period after 'that' and a new sentence with 'She'
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Nice story. (Don't coincidences happen all the time? lol)
"and a cold Coors." - redundant? Back in my youth, when I drank, Coors was known nationwide as 'always' cold, shipped cold, kept cold.
"it wasn't like that she was a waitress at IHOP" - needs a period after 'that' and a new sentence with 'She'
Best wishes.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Wayne, I do remember that Coors was shipped cold; that was why it had limited distribution. Thank you for reading and suggesting the edit. Terry.