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A swan song of a leaf

I'm back home

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Comment from mermaids
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I like how you describe the leaf, an analogy to life. I am glad things are looking up for you and walking is in your future along with being back home with your kitty.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022

Comment from karenina
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There he is! Home and optimistic and posting anew! Love this, Jesse.

Most of all, love that your surgery was a success and you're on your way to walking unassisted!

I missed you!

Karenina


 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
    Good morning, Karenina!
    Thanks for the exceptional rating and review. I am grateful to be back home again and with Sunny my kitty!
    The surgery was a success and now I need to work on walking with the aid of a walker. I am on my way to walking and hiking on the trails near my home.
    I missed you too!
    Take care, my friend,
    Jesse
reply by karenina on 19-Oct-2022
    This is fantastic news! Keep up the hard work and don't forget to take time to gift us with your posts!
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
    I will!
reply by karenina on 19-Oct-2022
    That's great!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Welcome back, Jesse. I pray everything is improving day to gday.
I enjoyed your post. I agree with you about choosing to be happy
or not. We are surrounded by beautiful 'things' like the purple leaf.
We need to stop and appreciate each before it's too late.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022

Comment from Spitfire
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Hi, Jesse. I was so happy to see your post and even happier to hear that eventually you may not even need to use a walker. Your 5-7-5 is right on target. And I liked the comparison to a purple leaf. The angels are with you, my friend.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
    Hello, my friend. One step at a time for me first I need to get out of this wheelchair and then to a walker and finally use my trekking poles to hike on the trails near where I live.
    Thanks for pointing out the parts you liked best. The purple leaf speaks to me and I hope it spoke to you as well.
    Thanks for sending the angels!
    Jesse
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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So glad you are home safely and full of optimism. I am glad you can already get out and enjoy the fresh air. I will pray for your speedy and full recovery. Wishing you all the best, Kate xx

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022

Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Jesse, so good to see you and print again. Your recovery news is very exciting and encouraging. My best wishes to you for a speedy recovery.
Sincerely, LateBloomer

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
    Good morning, Margaret!
    I am also excited to be back home and now the work has just begun where I work with my physical therapist in order to walk with the aid of a walker down the hallway to the end where there is a beautiful window to look out in.
    Thank you for your good wishes and prayers.
    Jesse
Comment from lyenochka
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So happy to read this beautiful account of where you are physically and emotionally! You are surrounded by friends there and here and you are radiant with hope. We'll keep praying and look forward to the post when you share about your walking. Loved your prose and poem update on you!

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
    Hi Helen! I am grateful to return back home and be with my friends and my kitty Sunny. I also look forward to the day when I am walking unaided but until then I will be happy to walk with the aid of a walker. I will keep you posted!
    Jesse
reply by lyenochka on 19-Oct-2022
    That is my prayer for you and for Debi that you both will be able to walk unaided soon!! 🙏💖
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
    Sounds like a plan!
Comment from Raul1
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We thank you also and it is great that you have found happiness in a lake. I also love lakes they are peaceful and a pleasant place for comfort. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing! A great big hug to you from all of us at FanStory!

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022

Comment from LJbutterfly
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I am so glad you are back home. Many friends here on FanStory thought of you and prayed for your speedy recovery. It's delightful that your first post after leaving San Francisco is a description of the bountiful trees at Elk River Estuary. Welcome home Jesse James, to FanStory.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
    Thanks, LJ. I feel welcomed by all of my supportive friends here on FS. Thanks for welcoming me home!
    Jesse
Comment from Heather Knight
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I'm so glad to have found the next part of the story I read before.
I think you deserve six stars for your attention to detail: the purple leaf works as a wonderful metaphor.
I also think you deserve the stars because of the hopeful tone of your story.
There's just a small typo: Unlike the dying leaf. I am filled with hope...
There should be a comma instead of a period after leaf.
I'm sure you'll be walking again soon. Keep us posted.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
    Good morning, Maria!
    Thanks for the exceptional rating and review. I am glad you liked the metaphor of a dying leaf and how I am not dying but have a resurgence of hope and will be walking as soon as I am able to.
    I will keep you posted on my recovery.
    Jesse
reply by Heather Knight on 19-Oct-2022
    Yes, please do.
    Take care and have a great day.