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Comment from bob cullen
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Very clever. I'm a little surprised Tom didn't get a mention. Mind you, I'm not for one moment suggesting he might be one of the girls. APOLOGIES TOM.
One of the things I most enjoy about Fanstory is the friendships you make along the way and the lessons you learn about writing. Thank you for providing this reminder of how good Fanstory is.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
    I too am so thankful for our friendships here Bob, as I have been so happy to feel like I know you and your fun sense of humor more a lot lately. Those are the kind that I always get the closest to. I truly feel that God gave us laughter to bless us in healing just as in friendship. Maybe next time I have one of these parties, I'll invite some of the men. The girls got a little rowdy as you probably noticed. Lol! Thanks my friend for your fun and kind comments!
Comment from Susan Newell
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Debi,

This is very funny, and I can't imagine that you missed anyone. There are certainly more you've mentioned than I am able to remember! Great job with the humor.

Sue

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
    Thanks Sue and thanks for attending. It was just a lot of fun writing it, yet I would certainly love if it really happened for real. There maybe some people that you didn't recognize by their real names. I sometimes will ask if they will tell me so I don't always have to refer to them as their pen names. Yet I never do until I feel I know them well enough. So thanks again Sue for showing up and for the fun comments!
reply by Susan Newell on 26-Sep-2022
    Most welcome, Debi.
Comment from Wendy G
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Wha a great fun poem, filled with humour and wit, and thanks for including me! It would be fun to have a real live event. You have included some great lines ... your mind and spirit amaze me. How are you doing physically? Are you still doing rehab in hospital?
Wendy

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
    Thanks so much Wendy and yes it would be a dream come true true to actually do this for real. But in the meantime I couldn't imagine throwing a party w/o you there. I hope you know what your friendship means to me.
    Somehow this silly little virtual luncheon actually made me feel closer to everyone, as all were such great sports. Lol, thanks for attending and for your sweet comments my dear friend! .... I am still in hospital but if all goes well I may be home in about a week, and will then have therapy and HHC daily for quite an extended period of time. I just want to go home. The hospital is an hour and a half away for my husband daily, but he always shows up. And then my kids take turns too but only 2 can come at the same time. I am so blessed in my three worlds, home, FS and the most important, my spiritual world. So I try to always remember that when nights get lonely here. However I believe with all my heart that God put each other here, together and I feel His gift daily. Thank you my sweet friend, Wendy for being one of those precious gifts!
reply by Wendy G on 26-Sep-2022
    You are very precious to many, and I am truly honoured that you count me as a friend. Think about His wedding banquet - we will surely meet each other there! That will be a celebration for sure!
    Praying that all your therapy goes well, and that you have maximal benefit from your operation.
    Wendy
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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I've wondered if there has ever been a FanStory writers' live event - a reunion if you will. Both men and women, gathered to get to know each other and attend workshops taught by accomplished writers and poets. Wouldn't that be great?

In the meantime, we have your fun little romp which sounds pretty much like how it would play out if a bunch of women got together for a pool party/brunch. Thanks, Margaret, for virtually hosting this event!

It's good to see you having fun while you're on the mend, Debi.

xxoo
Pam

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Hhhmm Pam, maybe we should plan a big birthday party for us. But we must fatten you up a little first so you don't blow away. Anyway it was fun and it would be great to do it for real, but I guess they tried to do it the way you suggested and it got so expensive, nobody could afford to go, so it got scrapped. I think planning a party someplace where there is a hotel attached would be awesome. Have the long party and stick with friends in rooms or whatever but not organized after the party. .....Y'know that is kinda why I wrote that poem for Tom. Remember the last two lines to it?
    "Maybe Tom should prove to us that he is really human"
    Take some member cents and plan a Great Writer's Reunion"
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Hhhmm Pam, maybe we should plan a big birthday party for us. But we must fatten you up a little first so you don't blow away. Anyway it was fun and it would be great to do it for real, but I guess they tried to do it the way you suggested and it got so expensive, nobody could afford to go, so it got scrapped. I think planning a party someplace where there is a hotel attached would be awesome. Have the long party and stick with friends in rooms or whatever but not organized after the party. .....Y'know that is kinda why I wrote that poem for Tom. Remember the last two lines to it?
    "Maybe Tom should prove to us that he is really human"
    Take some member cents and plan a Great Writer's Reunion"
    I did get the most Hilarious review for that poem from Tom!
reply by Pam Lonsdale on 25-Sep-2022
    Really? I should go in and look at Tom's review - I missed that.

    Yes, I'm sure any kind of live reunion would be too expensive for many. We'll see what the future holds.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    He sent it to me in a private email, but it was so good, I will send it to you.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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That was a clever poem, Debi, I'm sure everyone that came to the party really enjoyed themselves. I like everything that was in the note, lol, I'm sure not one of them could take offence. I hope you are doing well? Are you out of hospital yet? Next time I'll borrow a row boat and come to the party!! LOL!! Loved it. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Don't you remember us putting you in one that night and sending you back to your cabin? I think you felt so bad for tripping KL Roquetmore(Kitty) that you had a little too much wine, so Gypsy, Cindy and Robyn were already.in the lake so they pushed the boat while swimming and got you back to the cabin we rented for all the girls? Haha! Fun time? I am still in hospital but after a week of healing a blood infection in my leg, I was bed ridden,
    (can't you tell too much time on my hands?) Lol! ' catheter and had three blood transfusions, I am on the mend and started therapy on Thursday. Will hopefully go home in the next week. Have all the bars and equipment there and be having 2 PT daily and HHC and extra nurses aids to assist me. By NY I'll be doing the cha cha cha! Lol
reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 25-Sep-2022
    LOL! Debi, what are they putting in your transfusions????? I want some!
    It really sounds like you've been put through the wringer! What a horrible few weeks. I bet you'll be glad to be home again. Do you remember where you live!!? 😂😂Sorry, couldn't resist that. I'm glad you're on the mend now. Let us all know when you are home. Love and hugs, dear friend. 🥰🥰🍷(glass of wine for when you come home, for medicinal purposes of course!) xx
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    😘❤️❤️❤️ 🥰
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This sounds like a very exciting lunch and I wish this poem was real as I wanted to dive into it and enjoy meeting all these wonderful poets for real, a magical write Debi, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Thanks Dolly! This one had to include all my favorite ladies.cause I will probably never do one again. But I hope you had fun at the party, even virtual, I can get myself right into it. So I'm glad you were there and as always being gracious and sweet. Lol, And thanks for the lovely review and kind words my lovely friend.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
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Debi,
I like your humorous take on some of the Fanstory and I knew.
Your poem is funny, and it has a chummy tone. I really liked it.
Good luck and
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    I knew I was forgetting one special person. My love you are as good as in there. Your invite just got delayed. You mean more to me than many so
    I'm going right now to find you a spot. Sorry, but you've been so special, now thank you for reviewing and your kind words. Check it out in a few!
reply by Cindy Decker 2 on 25-Sep-2022
    Thank you very much, Debi. You?re a sweet person too. I like writing and people style!
    I will check it out.
    Blessings,
    Cindy
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Well it feels complete now. I knew I was missing someone so I am just glad you reviewed. The minute I saw your name I said out loud, that's it.. My husband says whats it? Lol. I just said, long story
Comment from karenina
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Ha! Offended! I'd be offended if I was left out of this hysterical romp!

It would be so much fun to all get together and dish!!!

You must be feeling a little better, since your sense of humor is fully intact...

This brought a huge smile, frim me to you and all the gals!

You can all come visit me.

New England is beautiful this time of year!

Hugs,

Karenina

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Awe what a good sport you are. I mean what could be better, getting big boobs and a whole lime to yourself. Lol
    I sent you a copy of my las5 correspondence with Jesse,so maybe there's something that will h3lp!
reply by karenina on 26-Sep-2022
    Hmmm. I have not received it. Please resend!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
    I recouped and sent them as an email to you instead. You then will also get my newest email meant only for friends
reply by karenina on 26-Sep-2022
    Thanks! Will check that out!
Comment from Sally Law
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This is a bunch of fun, loaded with great company, a little tabloid news, and a pool. I'm delighted to be in the cha cha cha performance. I've been practicing. Really!

Sending you my best today and six stars to bless,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Thank you for this beautiful review and for teaching Helen and me
    the cha cha cha, when I can walk! Just thank you for everything..,,
    Hope you had a good time at Maggie's party!
reply by Sally Law on 25-Sep-2022
    Fabulous party! My pleasure to read you as always, my friend. Love and blessings, Your Gal Sal XOs
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hello Debi, very good, very cute. It sounds like Margaret's brunch was a splash - lol. Of special note:
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As Maria and Evie plot revenge, Margaret better watch her drink
(Don't worry about me, I'm a city girl. I watch my drink at all times.)

Sally, Helen and Debi are doing the cha cha cha
(I would love to see that. It would bring tears to my eyes.)

Deb, don't worry, at the Christmas party, I'll write my notes in steno, and they will be juicy. A fun poem. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Thank you so much my dear sis! What a lovely review from the hostess w the mostest. Like I said, thanks for being such a good sport. But you did win out at the end! And thanks for everything else you do for me.