Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 76 "Golden needle and silver thread"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from Paul McFarland
A very nice message. I hope you have a lot of silver thread. There is a lot of mending to do in this world. I think kit would be nice if you had some help with this project.
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A very nice message. I hope you have a lot of silver thread. There is a lot of mending to do in this world. I think kit would be nice if you had some help with this project.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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I loved your extra hands anytime, Paul!
Comment from Wendy G
What a pity I don't have six stars left for your lovely poem. I enjoyed your thoughtful write about the needle piercing the coldest hearts, and silver thread to sew up broken hearts and tears. And the delightful ending: well done, good and faithful servant.
Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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What a pity I don't have six stars left for your lovely poem. I enjoyed your thoughtful write about the needle piercing the coldest hearts, and silver thread to sew up broken hearts and tears. And the delightful ending: well done, good and faithful servant.
Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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We do, thank for the virtual six 🙏🙏🫢
Comment from karenina
This brought to mind that old favorite country song, "Silver Threads and Golden Needles"--
Dolly Parton, Loretta Lynn and Tammy Wynette, if I remember correctly.
You morphed the title a bit and gave it a beautiful faith based theme...
This world could use some mending!
Karenina
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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This brought to mind that old favorite country song, "Silver Threads and Golden Needles"--
Dolly Parton, Loretta Lynn and Tammy Wynette, if I remember correctly.
You morphed the title a bit and gave it a beautiful faith based theme...
This world could use some mending!
Karenina
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Thanks, I was unaware of that song title, not my genre, 🫢🫢🫢
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My dad raised us on country music...
Odd at the time for a New Englander!
Comment from Carlos' girl
Very Interesting. Your poem reminds me of the country song "Silver Threads And Golden Needles". It was recorded by singer Linda Ronstadt.
Sometimes things are derivative
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Very Interesting. Your poem reminds me of the country song "Silver Threads And Golden Needles". It was recorded by singer Linda Ronstadt.
Sometimes things are derivative
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Thank you,
Comment from Marienkiefer
A well crafted poem that is suggestive In the toil and wear in the sweatshop of life. God has given us something rare.
Sparkling in this poem:
-Wonderful rhymes.
-introspection, imagery, nice flow.
-Great metaphors
-Skillful hand, an informed eye.
-nicely structured stanzas.
We are God's creation, the powers that heal are far greater than choice silver.
Lovely, healing and refined messages, illustrative of devotion, and of the work of skilled craftsmen. An interesting picture you paint of textile industry, harmonizing history and faith--that we are crafted in God's hands.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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A well crafted poem that is suggestive In the toil and wear in the sweatshop of life. God has given us something rare.
Sparkling in this poem:
-Wonderful rhymes.
-introspection, imagery, nice flow.
-Great metaphors
-Skillful hand, an informed eye.
-nicely structured stanzas.
We are God's creation, the powers that heal are far greater than choice silver.
Lovely, healing and refined messages, illustrative of devotion, and of the work of skilled craftsmen. An interesting picture you paint of textile industry, harmonizing history and faith--that we are crafted in God's hands.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Smiling back.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful rhyming spiritual poem of faith helping to make things better for others. You used very beautiful and well written words. And perfect art work. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very beautiful rhyming spiritual poem of faith helping to make things better for others. You used very beautiful and well written words. And perfect art work. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from royowen
Of course one of the songs I sung, while we feeding the poor on Sunday nights, was "silver threads and golden needles". So I can relate most kindly to your fabulous rhyming poem. Yes indeed, God can repair all our crimson garment's tears and rips. This is beautifully written dear friend, go luck, blessings Roy
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Of course one of the songs I sung, while we feeding the poor on Sunday nights, was "silver threads and golden needles". So I can relate most kindly to your fabulous rhyming poem. Yes indeed, God can repair all our crimson garment's tears and rips. This is beautifully written dear friend, go luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Roy, thank you. Sadly, I was unaware or at this stage in life remember this song. But, regardless I am so grateful for your words.God can I believe still does repair those rips in broken souls.
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Well done
Comment from country ranch writer
9/8/2022-
-7:31 pm
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Sadness come to many over decades wishing their hearts and souls could be repaired Not many have.
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9/8/2022-
-7:31 pm
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Sadness come to many over decades wishing their hearts and souls could be repaired Not many have.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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🙏🙏🙏😢😢😢. So many are lost.