Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 62 "Summer sizzle"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good choice of artwork.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the description of the road trip,
but the temperature was way too hot.
-It is a timely poem for a lot of the country.
-I like the question at the end, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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-Good choice of artwork.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the description of the road trip,
but the temperature was way too hot.
-It is a timely poem for a lot of the country.
-I like the question at the end, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Pam, thanks for the good wishes!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
That is hot and a road trip sounds like a nightmare in those temperatures. You made me smile with this short and humid write, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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That is hot and a road trip sounds like a nightmare in those temperatures. You made me smile with this short and humid write, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Thanks Dolly, the heat index today is projected to be 109 degrees Fahrenheit, In Gainesville, FL where we are heading. taking a load of household goods to our daughter as we are preparing for a big downsizing with a new home we nearly finished building.
Comment from royowen
This is a fine quantrian? Er cinquain Jim, a lovely post my friend, a fine poem my be hot there, it's middle of the winter here, it's easier to get warm than cold, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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This is a fine quantrian? Er cinquain Jim, a lovely post my friend, a fine poem my be hot there, it's middle of the winter here, it's easier to get warm than cold, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Hi Friend, I do dislike getting cold! But, the heat index today is projected to be 109 degrees Fahrenheit, In Gainesville, FL where we are heading. taking a load of household goods to our daughter as we are preparing for a big downsizing with a new home we nearly finished building. I will think about a nice winter day In Australia land as I drive into the heat vortex. 😅😅
Comment from Sally Law
I've had my share of these hot road trips with no a/c. My first and second car had black pleather interior and no a/c. Poor me! Sending you my best today as always and my very best for the Cinquain poetry contest,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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I've had my share of these hot road trips with no a/c. My first and second car had black pleather interior and no a/c. Poor me! Sending you my best today as always and my very best for the Cinquain poetry contest,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Smiling back, with knowing how bad those days were. Thanks for the good wishes.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello JLR, a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your Cinquain Poem entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Hello JLR, a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your Cinquain Poem entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Thank you sir! I hope your weekend is filled with some peace and joy!🙏🙏🎶🎶🎶
Comment from Fleedleflump
Ah, the summer sizzle indeed. I do wish we could have the brightness and colour without the searing heat and clutching humidity. I enjoyed your fun little piece in the form of a Cinquain :-)
Mike
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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Ah, the summer sizzle indeed. I do wish we could have the brightness and colour without the searing heat and clutching humidity. I enjoyed your fun little piece in the form of a Cinquain :-)
Mike
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Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Thanks Mike, driving a uhaul for truck with no air conditioning loaded with our castoff home furnishes being giving to our daughter in Florida is not for the feint of heart in this heat, I am rushing back into the mountains on Sunday,of this you can be certain.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces a journey made from a mountainous area down to the seashore.
The work earns its texture through its strict compliance with the specified entry requirements for the Conquian Poetry Contest.
Excellent work. Bravo.
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces a journey made from a mountainous area down to the seashore.
The work earns its texture through its strict compliance with the specified entry requirements for the Conquian Poetry Contest.
Excellent work. Bravo.
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Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Thank you.
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Remain Blessed.