Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "Cocoa Puffs"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from Lilly Flowers
Oh, dear, I don't think it did his body any good to get hooked on one of America's breakfast cereals. Back then they probably didn't even pretend they packed it with vitamins. What a charming poem. It was written well and a pleasure to read. Best regards, Lilly
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Oh, dear, I don't think it did his body any good to get hooked on one of America's breakfast cereals. Back then they probably didn't even pretend they packed it with vitamins. What a charming poem. It was written well and a pleasure to read. Best regards, Lilly
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Lilly, thank you for your strong validation!
Comment from June Sargent
What a sweet memory you have shared with us in this lovely free verse! I actually had a similar experience with fruit loops, which came out a decade later. I'm glad you decided everything was going to be all right in America. Your grandad was a very wise man...
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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What a sweet memory you have shared with us in this lovely free verse! I actually had a similar experience with fruit loops, which came out a decade later. I'm glad you decided everything was going to be all right in America. Your grandad was a very wise man...
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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June, thank you so much! I am very happy the lad like chocolate, for many obvious reasons. 😊😊
Comment from Bridge
A very interesting story in a poem. Very well described. Very well written. I have a 13 yr old son who hates chocolate. All the best to you.
With regards
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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A very interesting story in a poem. Very well described. Very well written. I have a 13 yr old son who hates chocolate. All the best to you.
With regards
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Bridge, thank you! This little lad from Ireland had never had chocolate before ...a good thing he liked it - smiling back!
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
This is absolutely awesome. Ok so you are a few years ahead of me, I still remember breakfast cereal of any kind better than oatmeal. What a great job of writing, as I not only enjoyed the nostalgia, but to new immigrants, grandpa knew what a treat this would be for a young lad in America!
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This is absolutely awesome. Ok so you are a few years ahead of me, I still remember breakfast cereal of any kind better than oatmeal. What a great job of writing, as I not only enjoyed the nostalgia, but to new immigrants, grandpa knew what a treat this would be for a young lad in America!
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Debi, thanks for the very supportive comments. This little lad from Ireland had never had chocolate before ...a good thing he liked it - smiling back!
Comment from Sarah Tummey
I really enjoyed reading this. I've never had to move to a new country, but there must have been a lot to adjust to, and even small things are big to a child. If this is about your life, you could categorise it as Biographical rather than General.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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I really enjoyed reading this. I've never had to move to a new country, but there must have been a lot to adjust to, and even small things are big to a child. If this is about your life, you could categorise it as Biographical rather than General.
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Sarah, thank you. Yes I might change this. Thank you.
Comment from LisaD123
This is an excellent recount of what it's like to experience something in a foreign country for the first time. You clearly capture the child's feelings and emotions whilst also allowing the reader to bring their thoughts and experiences to the poem. Thanks for sharing such a well-written piece.
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This is an excellent recount of what it's like to experience something in a foreign country for the first time. You clearly capture the child's feelings and emotions whilst also allowing the reader to bring their thoughts and experiences to the poem. Thanks for sharing such a well-written piece.
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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LisaD I certainly appreciate your extra star for this poem!
Comment from Haylee Hemphill
Hello!
Your descriptive words are so intriguing. You definitely capture your readers attention. Thank you for sharing! I hope you continue to share your work with our community and others.
One Love
Haylee
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Hello!
Your descriptive words are so intriguing. You definitely capture your readers attention. Thank you for sharing! I hope you continue to share your work with our community and others.
One Love
Haylee
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Marienkiefer
Very nice poem.
-First taste of a new life and a lasting memory of a home away from home.
-Nice recollections of a boy with his grandad.
I remember the commercial... Crazy for cocoa puffs!
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Very nice poem.
-First taste of a new life and a lasting memory of a home away from home.
-Nice recollections of a boy with his grandad.
I remember the commercial... Crazy for cocoa puffs!
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Smiling back!
Comment from Wendy G
An interesting story in free verse poetry detailing the child's transition from a hearty home cooked breakfast to a typical American one as he settled into a new and very different way of life. Best wishes for your fine entry for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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An interesting story in free verse poetry detailing the child's transition from a hearty home cooked breakfast to a typical American one as he settled into a new and very different way of life. Best wishes for your fine entry for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thank you for the good wishes.
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. The kid got lucky for what he wanted to eat was cocoa puffs with chocolate milk. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. The kid got lucky for what he wanted to eat was cocoa puffs with chocolate milk. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Raul, thanks!