Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from royowen
I love this Jim, it reminds me of that song, "Mary did you know" the sheer innocent simplicity of a young Hebrew maiden chosen from before the beginning of time to bear the messiah, the hope of man, Heaven's diadem, this is beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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I love this Jim, it reminds me of that song, "Mary did you know" the sheer innocent simplicity of a young Hebrew maiden chosen from before the beginning of time to bear the messiah, the hope of man, Heaven's diadem, this is beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 13-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Roy, I am very grateful for your comments that adds such sparkle to this poem. Be Well!
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Well done
Comment from E. Denison
This is a very thoughtful and referenced entry for the club event this week, JLR. I have been educated on a couple of definitions through your author's notes and feel better for it! I love the opportunity to learn new things. Beyond this, I admire the style of this poem. I think it works well with the subject matter and accompanying image. Some forms just work better with certain images, what can I say? Thank you for this well thought out entry.
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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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This is a very thoughtful and referenced entry for the club event this week, JLR. I have been educated on a couple of definitions through your author's notes and feel better for it! I love the opportunity to learn new things. Beyond this, I admire the style of this poem. I think it works well with the subject matter and accompanying image. Some forms just work better with certain images, what can I say? Thank you for this well thought out entry.
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Comment Written 13-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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I am very grateful for your validation on this poem and delight that I added purpose to your experience.