Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Trusting your Senses"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from dellsworthpoet
A tongue in cheek commentary.
I like the playfulness of this poem and also its reality. The crossover between hearing and smelling is particularly clever. The flow is good.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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A tongue in cheek commentary.
I like the playfulness of this poem and also its reality. The crossover between hearing and smelling is particularly clever. The flow is good.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thanks for that pick-up.
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You are most welcome. Keep writing.
Comment from mermaids
I like how you call the nose a "sniffer". It is unique and creative and fits perfectly in your words. This is a fun poem to read out loud with the strong rhythm of your words. The cliches you have listed are quite interesting, I like the one about people with high self-esteem.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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I like how you call the nose a "sniffer". It is unique and creative and fits perfectly in your words. This is a fun poem to read out loud with the strong rhythm of your words. The cliches you have listed are quite interesting, I like the one about people with high self-esteem.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Boogienights
This is a terrific form of poetry that I haven't tried. I think the sense of smell is the strongest sense we have. Did you know that you can't taste anything if you lose your sense of smell? Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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This is a terrific form of poetry that I haven't tried. I think the sense of smell is the strongest sense we have. Did you know that you can't taste anything if you lose your sense of smell? Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Yes the loss of smell has affected taste buds many who experienced Covid
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written octelle, and a great bonus that highlighted the poem in the narrative and gave it a great prominence as well, beautifully written my friend, well done my fiend, once again, blessing Roy
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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A beautifully written octelle, and a great bonus that highlighted the poem in the narrative and gave it a great prominence as well, beautifully written my friend, well done my fiend, once again, blessing Roy
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thanksand enjoy your weekedn to the fullest~
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You too
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I enjoyed the graphic poster as well as the poem. I think we have all experienced those at some point in our lives. I especially like the 'outside the box' one. I had heard the saying and have used it, but didn't know research part.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I enjoyed the graphic poster as well as the poem. I think we have all experienced those at some point in our lives. I especially like the 'outside the box' one. I had heard the saying and have used it, but didn't know research part.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thank you much Barbara.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
I enjoyed reading about the five cliches but the poem didn't do much for me. It didn't rise up to the standard you set by offering us the cliches which actually meant more than we thought. The title, Trusting your senses set me up for a good time and the presentation with the cliches written on the poster did just that but the poem left something to be desired, my friend, I am sorry to tell you so.
Thanks for sharing what you know about the five cliches!
Jesse
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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I enjoyed reading about the five cliches but the poem didn't do much for me. It didn't rise up to the standard you set by offering us the cliches which actually meant more than we thought. The title, Trusting your senses set me up for a good time and the presentation with the cliches written on the poster did just that but the poem left something to be desired, my friend, I am sorry to tell you so.
Thanks for sharing what you know about the five cliches!
Jesse
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Jesse thanks for oyur honest feedback
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Thank you for accepting my criticism.
Jesse
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Well written. Good work.
Odd that we translate fishy as bad, when to a fisherman or a chef, or a hungry person ...
"wash my hands of it" might predate Macbeth at least as far back as Rome's Pontius Pilot of the New Testament.
Nice poem. Thank you.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Well written. Good work.
Odd that we translate fishy as bad, when to a fisherman or a chef, or a hungry person ...
"wash my hands of it" might predate Macbeth at least as far back as Rome's Pontius Pilot of the New Testament.
Nice poem. Thank you.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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True ..
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hah, JLR!
Smiles all around!
I, too, possess a persnickety "sniffer!"
When my son was a little boy, we had many, many conversations regarding when his soccer uniform and accessories needed to be washed! :)
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Hah, JLR!
Smiles all around!
I, too, possess a persnickety "sniffer!"
When my son was a little boy, we had many, many conversations regarding when his soccer uniform and accessories needed to be washed! :)
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Smiling back!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Have you ever wondered who in their right mind came up with so many variations of poetry? You did this Octelle swell and therefore think you should frame a new brand of poetry yourself. Even word check doesn't recognize the word OCTELLE
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Have you ever wondered who in their right mind came up with so many variations of poetry? You did this Octelle swell and therefore think you should frame a new brand of poetry yourself. Even word check doesn't recognize the word OCTELLE
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Tom that is very funny!
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One can begin to reshape the landscape with a single flower, Captain. ? Spock,
Comment from Ricky1024
"Trusting Your Senses"
This was an interesting story in well read, as written.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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"Trusting Your Senses"
This was an interesting story in well read, as written.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Thanks for the validation