Secluded
a 5-7-523 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You are (p) fit and (m) wise; rightly, you have worded vividly, within your thoughts, you think it is secluded within the quietness of your muse of thoughts, silence of the snow; well said, well done; keep writing. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR p = physically, m = mentally
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2021
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You are (p) fit and (m) wise; rightly, you have worded vividly, within your thoughts, you think it is secluded within the quietness of your muse of thoughts, silence of the snow; well said, well done; keep writing. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR p = physically, m = mentally
Comment Written 21-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2021
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Thank you!!
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is a lovely and creative poem. I love the artwork you added as it does a great job of complimenting the writing. I like the message your poetry sends. Best of luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2021
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This is a lovely and creative poem. I love the artwork you added as it does a great job of complimenting the writing. I like the message your poetry sends. Best of luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 21-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2021
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Thank you!!!
Comment from Pantygynt
Clearly this is a 5-7-5 poem incorrectly posted as prose - General Fiction. Since it is not entered into any contest this is not a problem, but had you posted it as a poem it would probably have fitted on its three lines beneath the picture rather than being squashed up beside it.
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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2021
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Clearly this is a 5-7-5 poem incorrectly posted as prose - General Fiction. Since it is not entered into any contest this is not a problem, but had you posted it as a poem it would probably have fitted on its three lines beneath the picture rather than being squashed up beside it.
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Comment Written 21-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2021
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But Jim, I entered it in a 5-7-5 contest??? :)
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When you went to post it you must have clicked mistakenly 'post a story' because that is how it has turned out.
