Poppy and Odi's Mission
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I know what tooth extraction is about; I agree with you when it is no fun to have a tooth pulled. The whale and its tooth is perhaps a good story to learn from. Is the story's ending going to feature a moral to the story?
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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I know what tooth extraction is about; I agree with you when it is no fun to have a tooth pulled. The whale and its tooth is perhaps a good story to learn from. Is the story's ending going to feature a moral to the story?
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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I think the moral is that we can all help each other whether we are the same or not. Most of my children's books have creatures helping other creatures. One has a mouse helping a lost kitten get back to his mother. Why not? Lol. Thank you, Rosemary, I really appreciated you spending time on catching up. I'm working on the final part now. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Sally Law
What a sweet solution to a whale of a tooth ache! Oh, to have such friends as these. I look forward to the extraction. Sending you my best six starfish pulled from the azure sea!
Sal XOs...
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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What a sweet solution to a whale of a tooth ache! Oh, to have such friends as these. I look forward to the extraction. Sending you my best six starfish pulled from the azure sea!
Sal XOs...
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much, Sal, for that lovely sixth star and fabulous review. I'm working on the extraction today, that will be a fun one!! Lol. Have a wonderful day, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from aryr
This was a delightful continuation, Sandra. Oh, how awful that you had to have a tooth pulled, perhaps you are right-Poppy and Odi would have been gentler. I love how you add the appropriate pictures at the right time. It is a great CUBE16. Very well done and extremely enjoyed. Blessings, hugs and smiles.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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This was a delightful continuation, Sandra. Oh, how awful that you had to have a tooth pulled, perhaps you are right-Poppy and Odi would have been gentler. I love how you add the appropriate pictures at the right time. It is a great CUBE16. Very well done and extremely enjoyed. Blessings, hugs and smiles.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Thank you for this really lovely review, Alie. Yes, actually, that was where the inspiration for this story came from. But Poppy and Odi will be a lot more gentle than my dentist was!! I'm so glad you enjoyed this part. Last part coming Sunday! Warm hugs, my friend. :)) SAndra xxx
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I will definitely watch for the last part, Sandra. You are most welcome, hang in there. Blessings, hugs and smiles.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Congratulations on another of your outstanding children's poem stories. They all should be written and offered to the world in books, not only for children, but for us big kids who enjoy them so much too. I never seem to have a six when I need them most. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Congratulations on another of your outstanding children's poem stories. They all should be written and offered to the world in books, not only for children, but for us big kids who enjoy them so much too. I never seem to have a six when I need them most. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Aww, thank you, Ric, what a lovely compliment! You are so sweet. This will be published for my friends two grandchildren. Apart from them I doubt it will get far, I have no idea how to promote. But I do love to write them. One part left coming up. They have to get that pesky tooth out ...but how? Thank you, my dear friend. Warm hugs. Sandra xxxx
Comment from June Sargent
And the adventure continues! Now there is a shark added to the cast of characters - although he does not seem to be too vicious or threatening. Was it actually just a submarine? Killer whale is still waiting patiently. Will have to stay tuned as they descend in their bubbles of air...
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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And the adventure continues! Now there is a shark added to the cast of characters - although he does not seem to be too vicious or threatening. Was it actually just a submarine? Killer whale is still waiting patiently. Will have to stay tuned as they descend in their bubbles of air...
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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No it was the shark, lol. He was in the first chapter and is a softy really. The whale hasn't long to wait now. The final part will be here on Sunday. Thank you, June, for this lovely review. I really appreciate it that you are enjoying it. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Sandramitchell,
Nice piece of Children Poetry having lucid as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology, enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting the episode related to whale's toothache and Mermaid's Poppy and Odi's activities.
Pictures enhance depth and beauty of the poem.
Very tough task, but LAUDABLE ATTEMPT!
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Hello Sandramitchell,
Nice piece of Children Poetry having lucid as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology, enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting the episode related to whale's toothache and Mermaid's Poppy and Odi's activities.
Pictures enhance depth and beauty of the poem.
Very tough task, but LAUDABLE ATTEMPT!
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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What a really lovely review, RP, thank you so very much. I'm delighted you enjoyed this part. The final chapter will be posted on Sunday and, hopefully, the tooth will be pulled and the whale free of pain! Thank you, also, for the lovely sixth star award, my friend!! Warm hugs. Sandra xxx
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Sandra, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
This is a delightful and original poem. MY grandchildren love them and ask me questions about the creatures. I love the rhyme and metre and the flow of words. Thanks for entertaining every age group. Cheers!
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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This is a delightful and original poem. MY grandchildren love them and ask me questions about the creatures. I love the rhyme and metre and the flow of words. Thanks for entertaining every age group. Cheers!
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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That is really good that your grandchildren ask question about the creatures! Thank you for telling me. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part. The final chapter will be here on Sunday! Will they get the tooth out? We will see. Lol. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Sanku
I loved reading this part .poppy and Odi going into the ocean in an air bubble would be a thrilling tale for all children.i will tell this story t ny grand daughters.they are in Singapore. They are 6 and 2and half.
I am sorry you dont have poppy and odi to pull out your tooth!.
I too just posted a poem I dont know if you Willget a notification
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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I loved reading this part .poppy and Odi going into the ocean in an air bubble would be a thrilling tale for all children.i will tell this story t ny grand daughters.they are in Singapore. They are 6 and 2and half.
I am sorry you dont have poppy and odi to pull out your tooth!.
I too just posted a poem I dont know if you Willget a notification
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Hi Sanku, thank you so much for this lovely review. One more part to come!! It will be a bit longer though.
Yes, they might have done a better job than mine did! It hurt for days after he took the tooth out. I've been to read your poem!! :)) Warm hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from JudyE
I can still remember getting teeth pulled. Fortunately, it hasn't happened for a long time now - touch wood! Hopefully, the whale will soon be relieved of his troublesome tooth. :)
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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I can still remember getting teeth pulled. Fortunately, it hasn't happened for a long time now - touch wood! Hopefully, the whale will soon be relieved of his troublesome tooth. :)
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Very painful! I hope your dentist was gentle, mine seemed to enjoy doing his job too much! Yes, the final part will be up next Sunday. It will be a bit longer, but I want these books to be around the same size. Scout and her Unicorn had four parts and with the colouring pages as well the final book had 72 pages, 32 of them are full page pictures to colour in. I think this will be a few more pages, but not many. Thanks, Judy for this lovely review! Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xx
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Sandra well another great post from you This is a delightful and original and your easy meter and rhyme added to the story of Odi and Poppy's bravery to retrieve the sharks tooth.
Ye me too have had a recent broken tooth extracted but I have a great dentist and she knows my fear of dentist (childhood trauma's) and is so good I trust her without question Have just had my last filling yesterday so all good for 6 months.
Cheers Chris sending a hug
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Hi Sandra well another great post from you This is a delightful and original and your easy meter and rhyme added to the story of Odi and Poppy's bravery to retrieve the sharks tooth.
Ye me too have had a recent broken tooth extracted but I have a great dentist and she knows my fear of dentist (childhood trauma's) and is so good I trust her without question Have just had my last filling yesterday so all good for 6 months.
Cheers Chris sending a hug
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Hi Chris! Thank you so much for another wonderful review. It's lovely to know you are still enjoying the story. A big hug for that golden sixth star, my friend!!!
You are lucky, good dentists are hard to find here, well, I find them hard to find. Perhaps they take a look at me and say to themselves, I'll have a bit of fun with this one!!!! Lol. It's not too bad now, but it was painful, and for days after.
Thanks again, my friend, and sending you a big hug as well. :)) Sandra xxx