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Looking for Orion - 2

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Brothers fight for faith ... and for their lives.

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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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That's what most people would expect from a farming community, they want the farming news, they're not interested in politics! LOL. I wonder if by not hearing that breaking news, they will somehow be getting themselves involved in it. Just thinking!! lol. I enjoyed reading this natural, everyday scene. Well done. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
    I live in a farming community. That's EXACTLY what would happen. Frustrating for us non-farmers! :) Blessings, Deb
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
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Very good chapter and very well written too. I thoroughly enjoyed the atmosphere of the old diner, the farmer's talk, the waitress, Cody's choice for the special, and the end! The man changing canals for the farmer's journal while Cody wanted to follow the kidnapping of a senator. Typical!

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 Comment Written 05-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
    Yep ? I live in a farming community. That's exactly what would happen (except it comes on at about 4:30 instead of 7, but hey ? who's keeping up with that! lol) Thanks and blessings,
    Deb
reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 05-Jun-2020
    Nice Deb! Are you following the farmer's news at 4.30? (lol). Thanks for the review.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
    Does 4:30 still COME in the morning!? HECK NO, I'm not watching them. lol We're retired now, and I"m digging sleeping in! haha. :)
reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 06-Jun-2020
    I was kidding you, of course. I have long retired now myself, and let no-one disturb my beauty sleep before 9 in the morning!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
    Yeah ? I kinda figured you weren't jumping out of bed to watch and see the price of wheat or pigs. lol
reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 06-Jun-2020
    No. No way. You guessed right.