Trapped Amidst Terror
A 5-7-5 Poem18 total reviews
Comment from susand3022
Hi Kahpot... I'm so glad that I can get out in the open air. I don't think that I'd care one way or another, as long as I knew I could get what I needed and I could open a window... but I'm not everyone. Some of us are fine being alone, others are not. Some of us are fine being indoors, others can't stand it. People with mental health issues have it the worst, they can't get to appointments and sometimes a facetime appointment isn't the same as being there... when they can do that... not everyone can. It's definitely harder for some than others.
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Hi Kahpot... I'm so glad that I can get out in the open air. I don't think that I'd care one way or another, as long as I knew I could get what I needed and I could open a window... but I'm not everyone. Some of us are fine being alone, others are not. Some of us are fine being indoors, others can't stand it. People with mental health issues have it the worst, they can't get to appointments and sometimes a facetime appointment isn't the same as being there... when they can do that... not everyone can. It's definitely harder for some than others.
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful and understanding comments and review, and yes it is harder for some, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yes, this pandemic acerbates the issues raised in your note.
Your artwork and words amplify on our current crisis.
Yes, are fears are exploding. Let us hope that this will pass sooner than later.
Stay safe.
Mark
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Yes, this pandemic acerbates the issues raised in your note.
Your artwork and words amplify on our current crisis.
Yes, are fears are exploding. Let us hope that this will pass sooner than later.
Stay safe.
Mark
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thank you Mark, and yes let's hope it does pass quickly, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from BethShelby
This 5-7-5 poem is well written and expresses a sad situation where fear is so strong it is like terror. If mind are fragile they can't take a state of terror long before them implode. It is a sad state to live in fear.
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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This 5-7-5 poem is well written and expresses a sad situation where fear is so strong it is like terror. If mind are fragile they can't take a state of terror long before them implode. It is a sad state to live in fear.
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thank you, and yes it would be a sad state to live in, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables to capture the presence of today's terror. News reports about the increase in mental and emotional turmoil AND drug addiction are shocking.
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables to capture the presence of today's terror. News reports about the increase in mental and emotional turmoil AND drug addiction are shocking.
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thank you for your very understanding comments and review, as always much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
You have captured the essence of fear in just a few words. The mental and emotional toll this virus has taken has yet to be seen. What the future holds only God knows.
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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You have captured the essence of fear in just a few words. The mental and emotional toll this virus has taken has yet to be seen. What the future holds only God knows.
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments and six stars, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Cindy Decker
Kahpot,
Excellent poem.
In a few words you describe for me what anxiety is. The comparison and contrast of explode and implode are effective.
I have found my fears are quelled when praying and while listening to soft classical music.
I love the photo. It is very disarming. But very effective.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Kahpot,
Excellent poem.
In a few words you describe for me what anxiety is. The comparison and contrast of explode and implode are effective.
I have found my fears are quelled when praying and while listening to soft classical music.
I love the photo. It is very disarming. But very effective.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thank you Cindy, for your wonderful and encouraging comments and six stars, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You?re welcome. 😊
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Today our state of living across the world is trapped amidst terror, explosion of fears in mind is common; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep posting. ALCREATOR
Typos:
Trapped Admidst Terror (Trapped Amidst Terror)
fragile minds imlplode (fragile minds implode)
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reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Today our state of living across the world is trapped amidst terror, explosion of fears in mind is common; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep posting. ALCREATOR
Typos:
Trapped Admidst Terror (Trapped Amidst Terror)
fragile minds imlplode (fragile minds implode)
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Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thank you for your very encouraging and helpful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think we all feel a bit trapped just now as we have spent so much time in our homes and we are afraid to go outside, this isolation is taking its toll on us just now, a poignant write, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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I think we all feel a bit trapped just now as we have spent so much time in our homes and we are afraid to go outside, this isolation is taking its toll on us just now, a poignant write, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Thank you Dolly, and yes it will be good to see the end of this, as always very much appreciated****kahpot