The Masked Truck
1947 Chevy Truck showdown21 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about an extraordinary photo taken of a truck with a mask. Like it us preventing the spread of the virus with humans all along.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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A very well-written poem about an extraordinary photo taken of a truck with a mask. Like it us preventing the spread of the virus with humans all along.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Sandra. I appreciate your review and comments.
Patricia
Comment from kahpot
How very well written with a lot of thought and humour, I had a hemi 265 in my young days, I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, an excellent read, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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How very well written with a lot of thought and humour, I had a hemi 265 in my young days, I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, an excellent read, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Kahpot. I'm so glad you like it. My husband supplied the information about the hemi and JJ's Old Heavy.
Patricia
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed this so much and especially liked the picture. You have to have a sense of humor to get through these "virus" days, and your poem helps
alleviate the worries.
Rhyme and meter are crafted well.
Thanks for sharing.
Nancy
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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I enjoyed this so much and especially liked the picture. You have to have a sense of humor to get through these "virus" days, and your poem helps
alleviate the worries.
Rhyme and meter are crafted well.
Thanks for sharing.
Nancy
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Nancy. I appreciate your review and comments. So glad you liked it.
Patricia
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Sam. This is hilarious. I laughed when I saw the picture and I laughed harder when I read the poem. It is a vey well constructed 8/8/8/8 with even meter and great rhyme.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Hello Sam. This is hilarious. I laughed when I saw the picture and I laughed harder when I read the poem. It is a vey well constructed 8/8/8/8 with even meter and great rhyme.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Robert. I'm so glad you liked it. I appreciate your comments and six-star rating.
Patricia
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You're welcome. Funny...
Comment from Drew Delaney
That is a fun poem, Sam! And the picture is perfect! Love the rhythm and rhyme. Disguise and passerby works for me! May not for others! It's good to just have fun and enjoy. I hope you have a lovely Easter Day! Stay well!
Drew xx
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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That is a fun poem, Sam! And the picture is perfect! Love the rhythm and rhyme. Disguise and passerby works for me! May not for others! It's good to just have fun and enjoy. I hope you have a lovely Easter Day! Stay well!
Drew xx
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Drew. I appreciate all your reviews. You have a lovely Easter, too.
Patricia
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Very well written! And that is one amazing photo. Whoever thought of putting a giant mask on a truck, has a fantastic sense of humor -- it's what we all need right now! But what's that on the windshield -- an eye patch, lol?
You did so well with the poem, in its creative content, rhyme and meter. It just happened to be the same make and model as the one from the "Street Outlaws: Memphis" TV show? That's incredible!
Great job with this!
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Very well written! And that is one amazing photo. Whoever thought of putting a giant mask on a truck, has a fantastic sense of humor -- it's what we all need right now! But what's that on the windshield -- an eye patch, lol?
You did so well with the poem, in its creative content, rhyme and meter. It just happened to be the same make and model as the one from the "Street Outlaws: Memphis" TV show? That's incredible!
Great job with this!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Mary Kay. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and I appreciate your review and comments.
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You're very welcome. Very nice profile pic, btw. - Mary Kay
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Thank you, Mary Kay.
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You're welcome!
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
What a charming poem you've written. You made me smile, and that's a good thing these days.
The photo was downright hilarious and made me smile, too.
Best of luck in the contest. Great job,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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What a charming poem you've written. You made me smile, and that's a good thing these days.
The photo was downright hilarious and made me smile, too.
Best of luck in the contest. Great job,
Rhonda
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Rhonda. So glad I could make you laugh.
Patricia
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Loved it!,,
Comment from Raul1
This is a very good poem. I like how you structured this poem. Thanks for sharing! Very good work! It is as it's told as a short story. Nice work! Good luck in the contest!
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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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This is a very good poem. I like how you structured this poem. Thanks for sharing! Very good work! It is as it's told as a short story. Nice work! Good luck in the contest!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Raul. I appreciate your review and comments.
Patricia
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You're welcome.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I think you can add this poem and the picture to the Corona virus, pandemic collection. I think when this is over, somebody should create a history of everything that was created during the pandemic :"I thought they had forgotten me,
Was left to rot beside a tree.
New hope I found the other day,
They made a mask for my display.
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Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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I think you can add this poem and the picture to the Corona virus, pandemic collection. I think when this is over, somebody should create a history of everything that was created during the pandemic :"I thought they had forgotten me,
Was left to rot beside a tree.
New hope I found the other day,
They made a mask for my display.
"
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Iza. I appreciate your review and comments.
Patricia
Comment from robyn corum
S&L,
hahahahahahahaha That is really fun. It's been crazy to see how people have put their own fun spins on this crazy isolation thing.
Thanks for sharing this one -- it's brand new! hahaha
Fun!
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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S&L,
hahahahahahahaha That is really fun. It's been crazy to see how people have put their own fun spins on this crazy isolation thing.
Thanks for sharing this one -- it's brand new! hahaha
Fun!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Robyn. So glad this made you laugh so hard. I appreciate your review and response.
Patricia