Revelation Reveals
...in ABC order35 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Well done. A poem with the entire alphabet. Good show. The content is meaningful. We must be aware of the end times, but not to misjudge the time. We will know when that time comes. Meanwhile, we must maintain a level here during this crucial time, without fear.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Well done. A poem with the entire alphabet. Good show. The content is meaningful. We must be aware of the end times, but not to misjudge the time. We will know when that time comes. Meanwhile, we must maintain a level here during this crucial time, without fear.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Raffaelina,
Thanks so much for your review and comments. God is a loving and merciful God and He wants everyone to be aware of the schemes and tricks of the evil one. No one knows the day nor hour, not even His son. But He has given us signs so that we will not be tricked by the enemy, letting us know the only one we need to fear is the anti-Christ. If we are believers of our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ, we have nothing to fear.
Lots of love...Portia
Comment from Frank Jauregui
Blessings and thank you for sharing this ABC order poem. You probably know that the alphabet was first taught to children in the united states by using scripture. We would do well as a nation and throughout the word for that matter, to go back to reading, believing, and living God's word.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Blessings and thank you for sharing this ABC order poem. You probably know that the alphabet was first taught to children in the united states by using scripture. We would do well as a nation and throughout the word for that matter, to go back to reading, believing, and living God's word.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Frank,
Thank you so much for your review and very wise comments, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Jonbeyond
You have left me schooled on the alphabets of faith ... you display the sigh of spiritual commitment in what you write ... my compliments to your artistic presentation ... like your picture too
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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You have left me schooled on the alphabets of faith ... you display the sigh of spiritual commitment in what you write ... my compliments to your artistic presentation ... like your picture too
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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My Friend,
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from bob cullen
This is both commendable and good. It's also very clever maintain the alphabetical sequence. While I'm not sure I agree totally with your views I respect your right to them.
I can't believe the Lord will inflict great suffering prior to His return. I prefer to believe in a loving God.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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This is both commendable and good. It's also very clever maintain the alphabetical sequence. While I'm not sure I agree totally with your views I respect your right to them.
I can't believe the Lord will inflict great suffering prior to His return. I prefer to believe in a loving God.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Bob,
I thank you for your review and comments. I believe in a loving God and from what I have read in the book of Revelations the sixth chapter, it is Satan who will be inflicting great suffering prior to Christ return. He will be deceiving many, I too respect your views.
Stay well and be safe...
Blessings
Comment from joycetreasures
Portia,
My friend, you have done well with this poem. (A - Z lines, awesome) "Revelation Reveals" is such a beautiful written poem, lady. I can see you put your heart and soul into this one. God is proud of you, and so am I. I love your last line, "Pray all will seek salvation, for repentance is the only way out. Also, you have some awesome rhyming words. I love this poem. We all should adhere to the warning of today. Great job!!!
I had to redo my "Kindness" poem over per the committee. They said, "I couldn't use the rhyming words ending in "ly." No problem, I just redid it, and resubmitted it a few minutes ago. I try not to get stress too much nowadays. Life is much too short for stress. How's Roderic doing? Happy Palm Sundayð??? Sleep well tonight. Happy writing:-)
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Portia,
My friend, you have done well with this poem. (A - Z lines, awesome) "Revelation Reveals" is such a beautiful written poem, lady. I can see you put your heart and soul into this one. God is proud of you, and so am I. I love your last line, "Pray all will seek salvation, for repentance is the only way out. Also, you have some awesome rhyming words. I love this poem. We all should adhere to the warning of today. Great job!!!
I had to redo my "Kindness" poem over per the committee. They said, "I couldn't use the rhyming words ending in "ly." No problem, I just redid it, and resubmitted it a few minutes ago. I try not to get stress too much nowadays. Life is much too short for stress. How's Roderic doing? Happy Palm Sundayð??? Sleep well tonight. Happy writing:-)
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Joyce,
Thanks so much for such an outstanding review, very kind comments and a six star rating, and you already know, God gets all the Glory!!
I had to reword my poem as well, did not quite understand why but I changed the rhymes. I pray you had a great Palm Sunday...
Sending love your way...Portia
Comment from Ross E Silke
This is just truly, truly amazing and breathtakingly beautiful! Wonderful to read--you've got all the points right! Truly exceptional. Of all the works I've read so far on this I'd have to pick this one out as truly on top. Amazing! Extremely well done. If only we could give seven stars.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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This is just truly, truly amazing and breathtakingly beautiful! Wonderful to read--you've got all the points right! Truly exceptional. Of all the works I've read so far on this I'd have to pick this one out as truly on top. Amazing! Extremely well done. If only we could give seven stars.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Ross,
Thanks so much for such an outstanding review, very kind comments, and six star rating they are greatly appreciated. God gets all the Glory!
Blessings my friend...Portia
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
..in ABC order
Revelation Reveals
by pharp
Hello my friend
Good presentation and you followed the rules for ABC poetry well.
I don't believe it's the end of the world but to each their own.
Take care
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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..in ABC order
Revelation Reveals
by pharp
Hello my friend
Good presentation and you followed the rules for ABC poetry well.
I don't believe it's the end of the world but to each their own.
Take care
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Gypsy My friend,
I pray that it is not the end, but I thank God for giving us signs so that we can be watchful and pray. I have heard all my life we are living in end times, but the bible says, "But about that day or hour no one knows, not even the angels in heaven, nor the Son, but only the Father. So I pray it is not the end of the world for truly only God knows.
Stay safe and well my friend.
Hugs...Portia
Comment from Susanjohn
Stunning!! Simply beautiful and should be framed!..So well done, great message of salvation. I really enjoyed this powerful faith packed message! Very nice.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Stunning!! Simply beautiful and should be framed!..So well done, great message of salvation. I really enjoyed this powerful faith packed message! Very nice.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Susan,
Thanks so much for such an outstanding review, very kind comments and six star rating, they are greatly appreciated. God gets all the Glory! Stay well and safe my friend...
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Michele Harber
Wow! I'm so impressed that you were able to do an Abecdarian Poem in perfect rhyme. There was not one letter whose corresponding word seemed out of place, even the "X," which I find the hardest to use in this type of poem. In fact, had you not done the first letter of each line in large white type, I would not have even recognized immediately that I was dealing with an Abecdarian Poem, as it flowed so smoothly.
Your poem is faithful and reverent and very obviously heartfelt, and a pleasure to read.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Wow! I'm so impressed that you were able to do an Abecdarian Poem in perfect rhyme. There was not one letter whose corresponding word seemed out of place, even the "X," which I find the hardest to use in this type of poem. In fact, had you not done the first letter of each line in large white type, I would not have even recognized immediately that I was dealing with an Abecdarian Poem, as it flowed so smoothly.
Your poem is faithful and reverent and very obviously heartfelt, and a pleasure to read.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Michele,
Thanks so much for such an outstanding review, very kind comments and six star rating, they are greatly appreciated. God gets all the Glory! Stay well and safe my friend...
Blessings..Portia
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You're very welcome. Thank you so much for the well wishes, and you stay healthy and safe as well.
Comment from MamaBebop
Portia,
Had a few moments to myself while the girls play outside. Your ABC poem is wonderful. I'm glad I chose it to read. You certainly covered all we need to know from A to Z!
Blessings my friend,
Beth
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Portia,
Had a few moments to myself while the girls play outside. Your ABC poem is wonderful. I'm glad I chose it to read. You certainly covered all we need to know from A to Z!
Blessings my friend,
Beth
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Beth,
Thanks so much for such an outstanding review, very kind comments and six star rating, they are greatly appreciated. God gets all the Glory! Stay well and safe my friend...
Lots of love...Portia