Life With A Butcher
A 50-word relationship.23 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, not one word wasted here in your clever description of this short lived relationship with the meat man, a well thought out and much enjoyed write, love Dolly x
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Ha ha ha, not one word wasted here in your clever description of this short lived relationship with the meat man, a well thought out and much enjoyed write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Haha! What a jerk! Love 'em and leave 'em! Wow! He needs a little trimming in the groin area! Maybe he won't be so callous after that!
Another excellent one in you series!! xoxo
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Haha! What a jerk! Love 'em and leave 'em! Wow! He needs a little trimming in the groin area! Maybe he won't be so callous after that!
Another excellent one in you series!! xoxo
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Chuck sounds self-centered, someone you might meat but be put off by the price of consumption. Sounds like Patty ought to look for someone who is a cut above the rest, or above Chuck, anyway. The last pun reminded me of some of the stuff that used to be in news articles about how hot dogs are made. Funny and fun post!
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Chuck sounds self-centered, someone you might meat but be put off by the price of consumption. Sounds like Patty ought to look for someone who is a cut above the rest, or above Chuck, anyway. The last pun reminded me of some of the stuff that used to be in news articles about how hot dogs are made. Funny and fun post!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
Comment from jenintorre
This is brilliant LisaMay. The best one yet. My favourite line is: 'He steaked his claim and boned her.' Hilarious. Love it. You are very clever. Love Jen.
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This is brilliant LisaMay. The best one yet. My favourite line is: 'He steaked his claim and boned her.' Hilarious. Love it. You are very clever. Love Jen.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
They get better and better. The words in this one are numerous. There are others that have asked for different professions and I am sure we will see those as well.
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They get better and better. The words in this one are numerous. There are others that have asked for different professions and I am sure we will see those as well.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
Comment from Louise Michelle
Very clever, Lisa. You've written another top-notch pun story. I loved the entire thing, from top to bottom and the image you chose worked well. Don't you hate having to fill up these boxes when you can't think of anything else to say, hah. Here's a six - that says it all. Hugs, Lou
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Very clever, Lisa. You've written another top-notch pun story. I loved the entire thing, from top to bottom and the image you chose worked well. Don't you hate having to fill up these boxes when you can't think of anything else to say, hah. Here's a six - that says it all. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL! That was really clever! I had a real giggle reading this short fiction story, I'll have to look up some of your others. To be able to tell a real story from different cuts of meat, is just plain ingenious. Well done. :)) Sandra xx
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LOL! That was really clever! I had a real giggle reading this short fiction story, I'll have to look up some of your others. To be able to tell a real story from different cuts of meat, is just plain ingenious. Well done. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
Comment from Gail Denham
Good night - that is so filled with puns, one must read it twice. Well done, as always - some stronger than others. you're off again - I do think a short journal/booklet of these would be fun to put together.
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Good night - that is so filled with puns, one must read it twice. Well done, as always - some stronger than others. you're off again - I do think a short journal/booklet of these would be fun to put together.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
Comment from Michele Harber
What a rump roast. He was definitely not Grade A prime.
Obviously this is a fun story, or I wouldn't't be having so much fun contributing to it. Of course you could have warned that it would be X-rated. My poor virgin ears (yeah, right). Thanks for another good laugh.
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What a rump roast. He was definitely not Grade A prime.
Obviously this is a fun story, or I wouldn't't be having so much fun contributing to it. Of course you could have warned that it would be X-rated. My poor virgin ears (yeah, right). Thanks for another good laugh.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
Comment from Pantygynt
Did this veally happen or was it a mere slice of of your imagination. A proper carve up as one might say. There lots of obvious ones here but also some really clever ones concealed in the text. Patty and Chuck themselves not being the least of it.
Did Patty were muttons on her hands in cold weather? Oh dear that is getting all mixed up with those fat finger things.
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Did this veally happen or was it a mere slice of of your imagination. A proper carve up as one might say. There lots of obvious ones here but also some really clever ones concealed in the text. Patty and Chuck themselves not being the least of it.
Did Patty were muttons on her hands in cold weather? Oh dear that is getting all mixed up with those fat finger things.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020