Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 161 "Shape of What's to Come"Assorted poetry
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation, Bill.
-I like the colored
fonts, too.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective imagery and alliteration,
as well as a good message
for the New Year.
-Good luck in the contest,
and have a great 2020!
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
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-Nice artwork and
presentation, Bill.
-I like the colored
fonts, too.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective imagery and alliteration,
as well as a good message
for the New Year.
-Good luck in the contest,
and have a great 2020!
Comment Written 31-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
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Thank you, Pam. Happy New Year.
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You are welcome, and thanks for the reply, Bill.
Comment from Mistydawn
Your artwork is colorful, very cheery fits perfectly with your poem. I like how you changed the colors in the poem. Like 2019 I'm sure this new year will have its ups and downs. All we can do is enjoy the good times, power through the bad, keep focused on our goals.
Happy New Year.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
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Your artwork is colorful, very cheery fits perfectly with your poem. I like how you changed the colors in the poem. Like 2019 I'm sure this new year will have its ups and downs. All we can do is enjoy the good times, power through the bad, keep focused on our goals.
Happy New Year.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
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Thanks, MD. HNY!
Comment from NickieT
I enjoy your your 5-7-5 and think that it is well written, however, I am personally a bit conflicted with the display. The image is very cool and while I like that you have incorporated the style below in your text, it is almost too contrasting to read the poem as a whole. I like the repetition of the "f" words being bold and blue but to me it is too strong of a contrast to enjoy the poem as a whole.
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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
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I enjoy your your 5-7-5 and think that it is well written, however, I am personally a bit conflicted with the display. The image is very cool and while I like that you have incorporated the style below in your text, it is almost too contrasting to read the poem as a whole. I like the repetition of the "f" words being bold and blue but to me it is too strong of a contrast to enjoy the poem as a whole.
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Comment Written 31-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
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I left the image, but revised the poem. HNY!
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I like it, the blue is still a bit distracting but I think that it works better now and the difference in text creates another layer.
Comment from nomi338
Not only will that be a tight fit, I may well wrench my back out of shape trying to fit in. I guess I had better adjust my seat belt for the anticipated bumpy ride ahead. I definitely do not think the ride ahead, will be smooth by any stretch of the imagination.
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Not only will that be a tight fit, I may well wrench my back out of shape trying to fit in. I guess I had better adjust my seat belt for the anticipated bumpy ride ahead. I definitely do not think the ride ahead, will be smooth by any stretch of the imagination.
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Comment Written 31-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
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Have a Happy New Year, nomi.
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You too Bill,(Ned, Pons, Red, De4d, etc.)