Life With A Shoemaker
A 50-word relationship.15 total reviews
Comment from Barbaraj1
I used to write puns all the time, so this poem with its play on words
was very entertaining. Some of the lines that I enjoyed were:
sole-mate
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I used to write puns all the time, so this poem with its play on words
was very entertaining. Some of the lines that I enjoyed were:
sole-mate
Comment Written 08-Dec-2019
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Yet another well penned and entertaining look at life with a professional. I enjoyed it and thought the word play well executed throughout. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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Yet another well penned and entertaining look at life with a professional. I enjoyed it and thought the word play well executed throughout. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2019
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You certainly shoehorned this clever write in with some positivity with now heels walking all over him here! Ha ha ha, these should all be included in a book Lisa! I would buy it! Love Dolly x
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You certainly shoehorned this clever write in with some positivity with now heels walking all over him here! Ha ha ha, these should all be included in a book Lisa! I would buy it! Love Dolly x
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Comment Written 08-Dec-2019
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
she'd found her sole-mate when they paired up, but tongues were wagging. He laced her drinks and it seams he shoed her friends away - he wouldn't leather see them.
LOL! Another gem. Love the use of sole-mate, tongues wagging, and leather (let her). Well done! :)
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she'd found her sole-mate when they paired up, but tongues were wagging. He laced her drinks and it seams he shoed her friends away - he wouldn't leather see them.
LOL! Another gem. Love the use of sole-mate, tongues wagging, and leather (let her). Well done! :)
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Comment Written 08-Dec-2019
Comment from PLAIN1
So cool..I love the play on words. Very good give and take in a toe to toe battle. Great little short tale. Full of goodies. I actually felt you could have gone on forever finding little nuggets of entertainment. Thanks for the adventure.
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So cool..I love the play on words. Very good give and take in a toe to toe battle. Great little short tale. Full of goodies. I actually felt you could have gone on forever finding little nuggets of entertainment. Thanks for the adventure.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2019
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Thanks for this brilliant review! I see you are new to Fanstory - Welcome! Thanks for becoming a fan - I hope I can keep you entertained with my stories and poems.
The 50-word limit in this story sequence is self-imposed, to tighten up my storytelling. Some jobs would no doubt lend themselves to a longer story, others are a struggle to make it to 50 words!
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Just love what you did with the 50 words