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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a complete and engaging story in exactly 75 words. The content is simple, but witty in its banter and word play. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a complete and engaging story in exactly 75 words. The content is simple, but witty in its banter and word play. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Thanks, Monica.
Comment from lyenochka
Is Jimmy the photographer who worked with Clark Kent? Maybe they aren't so fictional after all but I doubt any of them would want a menage a trois, unless I missed an episode.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Is Jimmy the photographer who worked with Clark Kent? Maybe they aren't so fictional after all but I doubt any of them would want a menage a trois, unless I missed an episode.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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There are likely more people named Jimmy than the fictional Mr. Olsen. Lois Lane, in this micro-story, is just a regular person. Had her name been Betsy Ross, Jimmy might have asked about her flagging popularity. :)
Comment from GWHARGIS
Very clever twist on the end. I liked the idiots taunting and how very predictable it was. I could feel Lois Lane's aggravation over the joke and knew it was probably not the first time shes heard it. Well done and good luck with the contest
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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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Very clever twist on the end. I liked the idiots taunting and how very predictable it was. I could feel Lois Lane's aggravation over the joke and knew it was probably not the first time shes heard it. Well done and good luck with the contest
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Comment Written 30-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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Thanks, Gretchen, for giving this a look. Good to see you?re back.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Well done! Everyone loves Superman and his team. Lois is obviously teasing Jimmy, who becomes the butt of the joke (pun intended) when he dares to question Lois. He laughs it off... I hope. ;)
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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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Well done! Everyone loves Superman and his team. Lois is obviously teasing Jimmy, who becomes the butt of the joke (pun intended) when he dares to question Lois. He laughs it off... I hope. ;)
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Comment Written 30-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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Thanks, Phyllis, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
This made me laugh out loud! The last line is a precious bit of humor. If something humorous is purposely written and makes me laugh aloud, it is 6-star-worthy. Good luck in the contest; a formidable competitor!
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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This made me laugh out loud! The last line is a precious bit of humor. If something humorous is purposely written and makes me laugh aloud, it is 6-star-worthy. Good luck in the contest; a formidable competitor!
Comment Written 30-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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Thanks, Marilyn, for the terrific review. Bill