Miscellaneous Poems - vol 3
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Comment from Debbie Pope
Yay! You did it. Hat trick for sure. You are right about the horror of this one. The photo and background make the entire thing more sterile and impersonal. I would give this a six star rating if I had one. Your use of the phrase "chill the bones," should put this one over the top.
I'll be watching.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Yay! You did it. Hat trick for sure. You are right about the horror of this one. The photo and background make the entire thing more sterile and impersonal. I would give this a six star rating if I had one. Your use of the phrase "chill the bones," should put this one over the top.
I'll be watching.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Ha! I should know better than to argue, but I don't think so, Debbie. Thanks so much :) Cheers, Craig
Comment from Y. M. Roger
I would have to say that it really just does not get more horrific than that, CD! ;) :) Thanx for sharing, sir, and best of luck in the contest! ;) :)
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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I would have to say that it really just does not get more horrific than that, CD! ;) :) Thanx for sharing, sir, and best of luck in the contest! ;) :)
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thanks so much, Yvette, for the kind words and good wishes. Lovely to hear from you. Cheers, Craig
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
it would be a horror story to be locked up, wouldn't it? I cannot imagine someone wanting to do wrong and not think about the consequences. Prison ministry is quite effective they say.
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it would be a horror story to be locked up, wouldn't it? I cannot imagine someone wanting to do wrong and not think about the consequences. Prison ministry is quite effective they say.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thanks for reviewing, Rosemary. Much appreciated. Cheers, Craig
Comment from Sallyo
Indeed a horror; of the most worldly and ordinary sort and, alas, not the sort one can comfort oneself "it's all just fantasy". Very well done! Good luck in the contest. (That line is cheating but hey - why should FS insist I have more words in a review than the piece itself has?)
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Indeed a horror; of the most worldly and ordinary sort and, alas, not the sort one can comfort oneself "it's all just fantasy". Very well done! Good luck in the contest. (That line is cheating but hey - why should FS insist I have more words in a review than the piece itself has?)
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Ha! Good question. Thanks for the great review. Cheers, Craig
Comment from GE Parson
Howdy Mr. CD
Those 6 words would put horror in the hardest of hearts.
I liked the picture you picked out to demonstrate the horror stricken man.
G E
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Howdy Mr. CD
Those 6 words would put horror in the hardest of hearts.
I liked the picture you picked out to demonstrate the horror stricken man.
G E
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thanks so much, Mr GE, for the kind words. Much appreciated, Craig
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I love the approach that you took for the subject matter. This truly is the worst kind of horror. You even managed to wrap it in a cleverly worded rhyming package. I like the powerful message conveyed in this well written work. Well done!
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I love the approach that you took for the subject matter. This truly is the worst kind of horror. You even managed to wrap it in a cleverly worded rhyming package. I like the powerful message conveyed in this well written work. Well done!
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thanks so much for the very kind comments. Most appreciated! Craig