Fishy, fishy
The love of catching the freshwater fish22 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is descriptive reverie about fishing that is quite entertaining. Your love of the sport, in fresh water, comes through loud and clear and the picture of you casting your line into the waters pops easily into ones mind as you set up the imagery. Good luck. Well done
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This is descriptive reverie about fishing that is quite entertaining. Your love of the sport, in fresh water, comes through loud and clear and the picture of you casting your line into the waters pops easily into ones mind as you set up the imagery. Good luck. Well done
Comment Written 28-Sep-2019
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Thank you
Comment from Janetsue
I haven't been fishing in decades but I used to love it. Your happiness at the angling engagement is obvious all through your couplets. I really like the fish in the picture...might be hand blown, but I'm not sure.
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I haven't been fishing in decades but I used to love it. Your happiness at the angling engagement is obvious all through your couplets. I really like the fish in the picture...might be hand blown, but I'm not sure.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2019
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It could be..regardless it is very cool
Comment from lyenochka
You did answer the fishy challenge successfully. I think your format seems to be regularly in couplets so you might call yours a blank verse. Your last couplet could be rearranged to a rhyming quatrain.
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You did answer the fishy challenge successfully. I think your format seems to be regularly in couplets so you might call yours a blank verse. Your last couplet could be rearranged to a rhyming quatrain.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the input
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and well written poem about the fish you like to catch. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the pretty art work you chose. I love that picture of the fish! Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
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This is a very nice and well written poem about the fish you like to catch. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the pretty art work you chose. I love that picture of the fish! Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 28-Sep-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
This poem was just plain FUN to read.
I am glad that people out there are still willing to reveal wee. Bits of themselves. Rhymes are simple, and for me not trying to be too cute. Rhythm flows just fine.
Bravo to the author!
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This poem was just plain FUN to read.
I am glad that people out there are still willing to reveal wee. Bits of themselves. Rhymes are simple, and for me not trying to be too cute. Rhythm flows just fine.
Bravo to the author!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2019
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You are so kind.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a charming write in its depiction of simple pleasure and sheer delight. While there are just a couple of uneven spots that break the smooth rhyme, they did not detract from the winning appeal of the poem...
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In my opinion, a charming write in its depiction of simple pleasure and sheer delight. While there are just a couple of uneven spots that break the smooth rhyme, they did not detract from the winning appeal of the poem...
Comment Written 28-Sep-2019
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I fixed one patch. Thanks for your insight.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi JLR. This is very nice. I like the image, too, of fused glass which is stunning. Your couplets rhyme, although it is stated as free verse which means occasional rhyme, and the theme is your love of fishing. My only suggestion would be to replace at least one of the three, "you see" with something else. Otherwise no changes. Marilyn
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Hi JLR. This is very nice. I like the image, too, of fused glass which is stunning. Your couplets rhyme, although it is stated as free verse which means occasional rhyme, and the theme is your love of fishing. My only suggestion would be to replace at least one of the three, "you see" with something else. Otherwise no changes. Marilyn
Comment Written 28-Sep-2019
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Thank you Marilyn, great input and so revised...
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Funny a true fish lover. I must admit the only fish i can recognize as the salmon and tuna. Thank you for sharing this delightful poem. Thank you for sharing.
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Funny a true fish lover. I must admit the only fish i can recognize as the salmon and tuna. Thank you for sharing this delightful poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Bichon
Aww, the fish in your photo looks way too gorgeous to catch! I've never been fishing myself, but your poem really set me in the mindset for it! Best of luck!
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Aww, the fish in your photo looks way too gorgeous to catch! I've never been fishing myself, but your poem really set me in the mindset for it! Best of luck!
Comment Written 28-Sep-2019
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She would be a catch and release..LOL
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
There sure is a HECK of a lot of end rhyme in this to be part of a Free Verse Challenge. In fact, it seems more like Rhymed Verse in couplets to me. Thanks for sharing.
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There sure is a HECK of a lot of end rhyme in this to be part of a Free Verse Challenge. In fact, it seems more like Rhymed Verse in couplets to me. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2019
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Effected dramatic changes