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Comment from Susan X Smith
Watch out cheating husband! You're wife don't mess around. This was an entertaining poem that met the contest specifications well. Although it was humorous it goes to show that betrayal can't be taken lightly.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
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Watch out cheating husband! You're wife don't mess around. This was an entertaining poem that met the contest specifications well. Although it was humorous it goes to show that betrayal can't be taken lightly.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
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Thank you for this great review. I'm so glad you got the humor in this. My daughters were horrified...hahaha. Thanks again. :)
Comment from beizanten
interesting title. A good opening paragraph, line 2 rhyme well with line 4. a well written second stanza. Love stanza 3 it thick with emotion. a quite powerful stanza 4 and 5. A sad and angsty stanza 6 and 7, the emotion flow quite well. The rest of the stanza was pretty dark but good.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
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interesting title. A good opening paragraph, line 2 rhyme well with line 4. a well written second stanza. Love stanza 3 it thick with emotion. a quite powerful stanza 4 and 5. A sad and angsty stanza 6 and 7, the emotion flow quite well. The rest of the stanza was pretty dark but good.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
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Thank you for this nice review, i really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Pantygynt
i love the hidden menace in this poem. It is a wonderful idea given the challenge set. One little grammaticasl hiccup:
'They'll be a little something extra,' -- In this line you are looking for an abbreviated form of 'There will be ...' That should be written 'There'll be ...'
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
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i love the hidden menace in this poem. It is a wonderful idea given the challenge set. One little grammaticasl hiccup:
'They'll be a little something extra,' -- In this line you are looking for an abbreviated form of 'There will be ...' That should be written 'There'll be ...'
Comment Written 28-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
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Thank you for pointing out that mistake, I already fixed it. I'm really grateful for your input. Thanks again. :)
Comment from Susan Larson
If I still had a six I would certainly give it to you! This is so well composed and something I personally relate to. You get my vote in this contest.
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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
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If I still had a six I would certainly give it to you! This is so well composed and something I personally relate to. You get my vote in this contest.
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Comment Written 27-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind words, and for this nice review. :)
Comment from Janetsue
Wow...a woman scorned is well-displayed here. But what is the cost of a broken heart? Relief from emotional pain can come in many ways. The best way is to realize what a louse he is and that escape from him is the right way to go...and then not look back at the misery. Easy to say!
I like the punch line here...gives a new meaning to the term 'just desserts'. Best wishes in the contest!!
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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
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Wow...a woman scorned is well-displayed here. But what is the cost of a broken heart? Relief from emotional pain can come in many ways. The best way is to realize what a louse he is and that escape from him is the right way to go...and then not look back at the misery. Easy to say!
I like the punch line here...gives a new meaning to the term 'just desserts'. Best wishes in the contest!!
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Comment Written 27-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
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Hahaha..thats funny! I wrote this tongue in cheek, i don't condone revenge...but i do understand it. Thanks for reading. :)
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You're truly welcome!