Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This has solid meter and rhyme throughout making for an enjoyable reading experience. So is it invisible tea the spirit world brings? Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019

Thanks, MA

Comment from Janetsue

Excellent

I feel just like that some days, but it's best to put it into the category of being part of the ups and downs of life. I'm truly sorry 'she' is gone and that you are suffering. Wounds often take a long time to heal. Please keep writing and posting your creative work.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019

Thanks, Spangle

reply by Janetsue on 11-Aug-2019

:-)

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

This started out as ho-hum, but my goodness, the last two lines made me smile. Not that insanity is funny, but just that it was a twist that was unexpected. Thanks for the author note. It's touching what a person will miss most--a voice, a scent, hot chocolate, tea. Thanks for sharing!

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 Comment Written 11-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019

Thanks, CC, for the kind review. Bill

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Well for someone who seems himself insane, he writes with no obvious problems. It's maybe time to enjoy some cocoa and maybe that would spark some joy.

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 Comment Written 11-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019

I thought this would be sentimental, but it went sideways.