Aladdin's Antique Attic
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow! The old curiosity shop rolled up in an Abecdarian poem here with a veritable feast of artefacts that I would love to look at and enjoy, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Wow! The old curiosity shop rolled up in an Abecdarian poem here with a veritable feast of artefacts that I would love to look at and enjoy, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your review, Dolly. I am a sucker for interesting old emporiums. Sounds like you are too.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet, I enjoyed your poem. This is yet another style of poetry that I am being introduced to. You did a good job on the execution of the writing prompt, plus you made it rhyme. great job.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Hello fellow poet, I enjoyed your poem. This is yet another style of poetry that I am being introduced to. You did a good job on the execution of the writing prompt, plus you made it rhyme. great job.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your comments... it's quite difficult to make a story with all the letters in the correct sequence. I thought by picking a subject that had a lot of potential variety I would give myself a better chance of success.
Comment from royowen
A very clever ABECDARIAN poem. You've added lots of alliteration, not only hitting the the right word for the letter, but working the language very well, when we do, there's really very little meaning but lots fun manipulating language, well done, an excellent poem, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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A very clever ABECDARIAN poem. You've added lots of alliteration, not only hitting the the right word for the letter, but working the language very well, when we do, there's really very little meaning but lots fun manipulating language, well done, an excellent poem, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 06-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Roy. It's a bit of a tongue twister too... it'd be good to read aloud for elocution lessons.
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Good job
Comment from James Orton
I don't know how you can refrain ..what a plethora of interesting things to go at. I'm pretty sure I could be in there for hours just by reading your description. A lovely piece .
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I don't know how you can refrain ..what a plethora of interesting things to go at. I'm pretty sure I could be in there for hours just by reading your description. A lovely piece .
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Comment Written 06-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thank you! You sound like a fellow junk-hound.
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Get me in the right shop and yes. Can be there all day.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, nothing better than browsing through old and memorable stuff and this house of treasures looks just the place, you have used the letters of the alphabet very well in this poem, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Excellent, nothing better than browsing through old and memorable stuff and this house of treasures looks just the place, you have used the letters of the alphabet very well in this poem, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 06-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thank you!