The Visitation
The light was still on.29 total reviews
Comment from light
Sally, I think this is an intriguing flash fiction. This mysterious traveling doctor reminds us that. We might entertain angels unaware. This looks like a winner.
Blessings,
Elaine
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Sally, I think this is an intriguing flash fiction. This mysterious traveling doctor reminds us that. We might entertain angels unaware. This looks like a winner.
Blessings,
Elaine
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much dear Elaine. I appreciate the excellent review and encouraging comments. It is always so appreciated.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
Comment from Debbie Pope
Impressive, Sally. As I was reading this, I was thinking she just might win with this one. I thought that you entered it in the contest for in a tavern late at night.
I was struck by your knowledge of Irish food and the little details you offer for the tavern. Your ending was absolutely energizing. It made me happy.
Nice job, Sally.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Impressive, Sally. As I was reading this, I was thinking she just might win with this one. I thought that you entered it in the contest for in a tavern late at night.
I was struck by your knowledge of Irish food and the little details you offer for the tavern. Your ending was absolutely energizing. It made me happy.
Nice job, Sally.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind encouragement, dear Debbie. I had a nice vacation and concentrated on my writing. I write every day but don?t publish it all. I?ve learned had to store it better and retrieve it for later use even if it?s just an idea. This was one of those. My muse is active these days and won?t let me be! Sending you my best today as always, dear Debbie.
Sal xo
Comment from Sugarray77
Sally, you have done a great job on this story of spiritual beings bringing divine blessings. I like the two parts ... the doctor/angel as he drives in and the life of the tavern owner. Both are equally well written. An enjoyable read.
Melissa
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Sally, you have done a great job on this story of spiritual beings bringing divine blessings. I like the two parts ... the doctor/angel as he drives in and the life of the tavern owner. Both are equally well written. An enjoyable read.
Melissa
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Dear Melissa, thank you. I appreciate the outstanding review and generous six star rating so much. I am glad you enjoyed my heavenly contest entry.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hey Sally. That is a really NICE story. I don't mean the word nice to be condescending or silly. There are so many stories that are not nice. This one incorporates faith, miracles and a belief in God. It is a quick and very easy read but that does not diminish the value of the story. I love stories like this one. Robert
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Hey Sally. That is a really NICE story. I don't mean the word nice to be condescending or silly. There are so many stories that are not nice. This one incorporates faith, miracles and a belief in God. It is a quick and very easy read but that does not diminish the value of the story. I love stories like this one. Robert
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and compliments, dear Robert. I appreciate the sincere review so much. I especially enjoy writing faith-based pieces as I love the Lord so much and want to show by readers a glimpse of Him through my eyes. It blessed me to hear of our shared faith.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :+)
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Thank you Sally. I enjoy our conversations.
Comment from Carla Trinklein
A lovely tale well told! Miracles do happen even in this day and age, we're just often too cynical to recognize them for what they are. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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A lovely tale well told! Miracles do happen even in this day and age, we're just often too cynical to recognize them for what they are. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much, dear Carla. I am so glad you enjoyed my traveling angel. I was inspired for the contest. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from royowen
This was brilliant Sally, I love the mysterious Doctor, who studied in heavenly university of the saviour. I had several when younger, saving my life in some, I never saw them, but heard them. Mostly when I was agnostic. Well done, superbly written, yes, they appear, and disappear, as mysteriously as they came. Well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : Upon return(ing) the harried owner...
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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This was brilliant Sally, I love the mysterious Doctor, who studied in heavenly university of the saviour. I had several when younger, saving my life in some, I never saw them, but heard them. Mostly when I was agnostic. Well done, superbly written, yes, they appear, and disappear, as mysteriously as they came. Well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : Upon return(ing) the harried owner...
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the honoring review and gracious six star rating, Roy. It is so appreciated. I am blessed to hear of your story of angel interactions. Like you, I have sensed them around me all my life.
Thank you for the critique, as well, I have repaired ?returning?
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :+)
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Welcome Sally and well earned.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a warm write with a miracle running through it and I believe in them and here you tell a subtle and heartwarming story Sally, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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This is a warm write with a miracle running through it and I believe in them and here you tell a subtle and heartwarming story Sally, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you, dear Dolly. I am pleased you enjoyed my contest entry. Thank you so much for the excellent review.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Sal. A good flash fiction here. In fact I think it may be a winner, my friend.
You have captured the color of the tavern very well indeed. Also, you have made your characters believable in a short period of time. Good luck with this one. Bob
Suggestion: I think you may have a typo in this sentence: ""Naw, just observant. By the way, how is you son? I hope he is feeling better." (your son)
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Hi, Sal. A good flash fiction here. In fact I think it may be a winner, my friend.
You have captured the color of the tavern very well indeed. Also, you have made your characters believable in a short period of time. Good luck with this one. Bob
Suggestion: I think you may have a typo in this sentence: ""Naw, just observant. By the way, how is you son? I hope he is feeling better." (your son)
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and helpful critique. I caught that missing r and repaired it. Thanks, my friend. I am so glad you were able to break away during your holiday to review my contest entry. I appreciate you so much.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :)
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You are special, my friend. for sure. : ) Bob
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You are special, my friend. for sure. : ) Bob
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Sally. You did a great job with its premise. I do believe angels are among us. Your story shows that in a great way. The clues are all there, but they are subtle. Your story sounds great in the Irish dialect, too. Thanks for sharing testament to true faith.
Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Sally. You did a great job with its premise. I do believe angels are among us. Your story shows that in a great way. The clues are all there, but they are subtle. Your story sounds great in the Irish dialect, too. Thanks for sharing testament to true faith.
Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind encouragement, dear Jan. I appreciate your encouragement and glad you saw the clues. I didn?t want it to be too far out.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from poetwatch
Sally, this is a very good write. Sometimes I think you have an angel whispering in your ear (and I don't mean your Hubby) :) I used to be able to write like that, the words would just roll on the paper. Now I write on the computer and I'm all messed up. :) This is a very good entry for the Flash Fiction Writing Contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Sally, this is a very good write. Sometimes I think you have an angel whispering in your ear (and I don't mean your Hubby) :) I used to be able to write like that, the words would just roll on the paper. Now I write on the computer and I'm all messed up. :) This is a very good entry for the Flash Fiction Writing Contest.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review and kind comments. Angels come in many forms you know. I?m so pleased you enjoyed my story.
Sending my best today as always, dear poet. Sally :+)