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Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "Where It Belongs"From victim to survivor of abuse.
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Comment from Joanna S. Blue
Your poem is inspirational and particularly meaningful to me at this time. I feel great respect for the journey you have made. I especially like the line about God leaving the door ajar. I want to read more--this is my first encounter with your writing. Thank you for sharing this. Joanna
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Your poem is inspirational and particularly meaningful to me at this time. I feel great respect for the journey you have made. I especially like the line about God leaving the door ajar. I want to read more--this is my first encounter with your writing. Thank you for sharing this. Joanna
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Hi Joanna,
I appreciate your kind review and wish you luck on your writing journey.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment from Sherylyl Wards
Your writing seems excellently thought out and is a true gift from God. It is reassuring to read a biographic poem and know that the person has come out of turmoil with God's help.
I am just beginning to write prose and have only written one poem, so the only criticism I can give is on how the poem affected me emotionally.
In that sense your poem is excellent; it touched my heart from beginning to end.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Your writing seems excellently thought out and is a true gift from God. It is reassuring to read a biographic poem and know that the person has come out of turmoil with God's help.
I am just beginning to write prose and have only written one poem, so the only criticism I can give is on how the poem affected me emotionally.
In that sense your poem is excellent; it touched my heart from beginning to end.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thanks so much for a lovely review.
I appreciate your time and I'm touched by your comments.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You speak about your past childhood days, how you enjoyed, entertained and passed all moments so freely, had adventure with God beside, nowadays mind changed; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
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You speak about your past childhood days, how you enjoyed, entertained and passed all moments so freely, had adventure with God beside, nowadays mind changed; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thank you for reviewing.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment from LisaMay
I am so glad for you that you have found true companionship and support as you walk into the future with God by your side. The one who crushed your soul was wrong. He was an impediment to your happiness, but your soul was just waiting for the right company and can now glow in the light of the Lord. It is important for your inner child to be set free. All the things you have written here are so crucial to emotional well-being.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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I am so glad for you that you have found true companionship and support as you walk into the future with God by your side. The one who crushed your soul was wrong. He was an impediment to your happiness, but your soul was just waiting for the right company and can now glow in the light of the Lord. It is important for your inner child to be set free. All the things you have written here are so crucial to emotional well-being.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thanks Lisa,
I appreciate your review.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Where It Belongs, presented in 8-6-8-6 quatrains and ABCB rhyme scheme, stands as a statement of survival after a childhood of the terror that we can only sadly imagine.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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This poem, Where It Belongs, presented in 8-6-8-6 quatrains and ABCB rhyme scheme, stands as a statement of survival after a childhood of the terror that we can only sadly imagine.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thanks Bill,
You are appreciated.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great writing that is a powerful expression of your journey to greater healing through trust in God and following his path for you. I would give you six stars if I had it. This type of writing speaks to me and is an encouragement. Very well written with emotion and chosen words.
Bill
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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Great writing that is a powerful expression of your journey to greater healing through trust in God and following his path for you. I would give you six stars if I had it. This type of writing speaks to me and is an encouragement. Very well written with emotion and chosen words.
Bill
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thanks so much for a kind and understanding review.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment from Earl Corp
It's good you have been able to overcome your childhood abuse and neglect and get back on the path God has set before you. I know this had to have been hard to write, thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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It's good you have been able to overcome your childhood abuse and neglect and get back on the path God has set before you. I know this had to have been hard to write, thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thanks for reviewing.
I appreciate your kindness and can happily say I walk with God.
Blessings
Shirley