Robot Love
Carnal Caperings contest entry16 total reviews
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Excellent rhyme and a very funny post. In the fifth stanza, 4th line, did you mean to say, ""What a stud I am?" Along poem, very well written. Of course, I had rather have the real thing.
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Excellent rhyme and a very funny post. In the fifth stanza, 4th line, did you mean to say, ""What a stud I am?" Along poem, very well written. Of course, I had rather have the real thing.
Comment Written 03-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Lol, so would I, Willie. Thank you for the great review and generous stars, friend. Yes, that's what that line is trying to say but I didn't have enough space, syllable wise, to pull it off. Have a great day.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A brilliant write! I laughed throughout! You deserve a six for this, but sadly I'm out! An ingenious write, funny and clever and this for me is a winner, you entertained and I am still laughing! A fabulous entry for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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A brilliant write! I laughed throughout! You deserve a six for this, but sadly I'm out! An ingenious write, funny and clever and this for me is a winner, you entertained and I am still laughing! A fabulous entry for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Dolly. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you had a couple chuckles out of this silliness. Have a wonderful day. Thank you again.
Comment from LisaMay
Oh my oh my! This is gushingly good. Perfect for a dribble fiction of 80 lines! Has your dick recovered yet? My mind hasn't. The images of your robot encounter will be scorched on my brain forever.
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Oh my oh my! This is gushingly good. Perfect for a dribble fiction of 80 lines! Has your dick recovered yet? My mind hasn't. The images of your robot encounter will be scorched on my brain forever.
Comment Written 03-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Lol. Thank you for the great review and for throwing the contest, Lisa. I had fun with it. I tried coming up with the most ridiculous thing I could think of and this is what came out, lol. I'm glad you liked this dumb piece. Have a great night.
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I hope you overhaul the Minx. I think real smut should win, rather than tame smut.
Comment from Chip Kuzborski
Lewd, raunchy, graphic, gnarly...and f-ing hilarious! An unabashed, no holds barred peep into perversion and the almighty quest to get off, by any means. Well done, in all its inglorious charm!!
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Lewd, raunchy, graphic, gnarly...and f-ing hilarious! An unabashed, no holds barred peep into perversion and the almighty quest to get off, by any means. Well done, in all its inglorious charm!!
Comment Written 03-May-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Hey, thank you for the fantastic review, Chip. Yes, some crazy people out there will go to extreme lengths to get there. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous write. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Debra White
Hello!
This is, erm, fun! :D
What a great piece, you had me laughing my head off.
I think you nailed the contest requirements perfectly.
Great rhyme and meter, lewd but in a good way and thoroughly entertaining. My favourite part - pretty much all of it because the imagery is just crazy!
Good luck in the voting booth. Best wishes, Debra :)
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reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Hello!
This is, erm, fun! :D
What a great piece, you had me laughing my head off.
I think you nailed the contest requirements perfectly.
Great rhyme and meter, lewd but in a good way and thoroughly entertaining. My favourite part - pretty much all of it because the imagery is just crazy!
Good luck in the voting booth. Best wishes, Debra :)
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Comment Written 03-May-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Debra. Yeah, I was trying to come up with the most ridiculous thing I could think of for this contest and this is what resulted. Lol. I'm glad you liked this twisted piece. Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Robot Love, presented in ABCB-rhymed quatrains, is totally hilarious from start to finish, or rather arousal to happy ending. Maybe not so happy. So funny though.
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reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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This poem, Robot Love, presented in ABCB-rhymed quatrains, is totally hilarious from start to finish, or rather arousal to happy ending. Maybe not so happy. So funny though.
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Comment Written 03-May-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review, Bill. I appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you found this silliness funny. Have a great weekend.