Pikesville
A talltale about the Old West16 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
Any a man came back to claim what was Oce there's but sadly lost it all in the end.so much unrest in the times of the old west nothing ever gets settled and ends up to be to much of a challenge.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Any a man came back to claim what was Oce there's but sadly lost it all in the end.so much unrest in the times of the old west nothing ever gets settled and ends up to be to much of a challenge.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this little story in a poem. Appreciate your review.
Comment from Henry King
This is an outstanding story that uses all the wild west icons of the American West. Four horsemen riding down a hill at sunrise, buzzards waiting, sheriff gone wrong, heroic young gunman, scared townsmen and the gunfight; with only one left standing. The scene is set and well known. The plot is perfect and also well known. The characters, only one named, but all are recognized. There is no dialog, but not one spoken word is needed. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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This is an outstanding story that uses all the wild west icons of the American West. Four horsemen riding down a hill at sunrise, buzzards waiting, sheriff gone wrong, heroic young gunman, scared townsmen and the gunfight; with only one left standing. The scene is set and well known. The plot is perfect and also well known. The characters, only one named, but all are recognized. There is no dialog, but not one spoken word is needed. Well done.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this little story in a poem. Appreciate your comments and the six stars.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Possummagic
Great story. I love a good western. I really like the way you bring each character to like. Billy did well to take on 4 bad guys. Well written and thoroughly enjoyable.PM
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Great story. I love a good western. I really like the way you bring each character to like. Billy did well to take on 4 bad guys. Well written and thoroughly enjoyable.PM
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this story in a poem. Appreciate your comments and the six stars.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Earl Corp
You should have entered this in the western poem contest. I like the originality of the story and how you made it rhyme. One editing glitch: Law and order come (came) that day to Pikesville. Nice job
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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You should have entered this in the western poem contest. I like the originality of the story and how you made it rhyme. One editing glitch: Law and order come (came) that day to Pikesville. Nice job
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this little story in a poem. Much appreciated review.
Comment from Colin John
Love it mark , a worthy contest entry and hope you do well, I could imagine I was there , could not find no snags and great choice of photo . Cheers Colin
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Love it mark , a worthy contest entry and hope you do well, I could imagine I was there , could not find no snags and great choice of photo . Cheers Colin
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this story in a poem. Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Tina Crute
What a great story you have shared with us. The whole tone of the poem was...Young Billy was different... it gave your poem a fresh David- and-Goliath kind of feel! I knew something good was going to happen.
I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing!
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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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What a great story you have shared with us. The whole tone of the poem was...Young Billy was different... it gave your poem a fresh David- and-Goliath kind of feel! I knew something good was going to happen.
I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this little story in a poem. Appreciate your comments and support.
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You are most welcome!