I See Her
Let the words speak for themselves36 total reviews
Comment from Blue Hendrix
wonderfully written poem with no mistakes. lovely seamless flow made it very enjoyable to read as well as your word choices and imagery. great job!!!!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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wonderfully written poem with no mistakes. lovely seamless flow made it very enjoyable to read as well as your word choices and imagery. great job!!!!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Blue Hendrix,
Thank you so very much for stopping by to read and review my work. I am honored.
jlsavell
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Your welcome
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Your welcome
Comment from Bicpen
I'm all out of sixes ... this is sublime, no words can surpass that feeling of poetry. It is with deep movement we hear these images portrayed again and again with so few to hear but you have the voice of them all.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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I'm all out of sixes ... this is sublime, no words can surpass that feeling of poetry. It is with deep movement we hear these images portrayed again and again with so few to hear but you have the voice of them all.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Bicpen,
Thank you so very much for your words of encouragement. I am honored and humbled..
jlsavell
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a startling write, in emotional and distinctive expression of the ultimate violation, within, and without. Narration is clear and in
the precise detail that one can only hope will be relieved in time and extended comfort by those, who absent understanding, of such a horrendous event, can still offer comfort and refuge - a remarkable and fluid free verse depiction of a crime of unequalled measure in that existence may continue, regardless...
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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In my opinion, a startling write, in emotional and distinctive expression of the ultimate violation, within, and without. Narration is clear and in
the precise detail that one can only hope will be relieved in time and extended comfort by those, who absent understanding, of such a horrendous event, can still offer comfort and refuge - a remarkable and fluid free verse depiction of a crime of unequalled measure in that existence may continue, regardless...
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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evesayshi,
Thank you so very much for stopping by to read and review my work. I am honored. Your words mean a great deal..
jlsavell
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You are very welcome indeed. I was not as articulate as I might have been in my review, because your words affected me deeply, and I was at a bit of a loss. Although I have never experienced such a horrid violation, as an extremely sensitive soul, I can empathize...Eve
Comment from James Upshaw
Wow. Powerful poem. I admit I did not see the twist at the end coming. You did a great job describing the plight of this woman and created an emotion of immense pity. Good job!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Wow. Powerful poem. I admit I did not see the twist at the end coming. You did a great job describing the plight of this woman and created an emotion of immense pity. Good job!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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James Upshaw,
Thank you for stopping by to read and review my work. I am honored.
Is there a particular work you would like me to review? Again thank you
jlsavell
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James Upshaw,
Thank you for stopping by to read and review my work. I am honored.
Is there a particular work you would like me to review? Again thank you
jlsavell
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You are welcome! I enjoyed it. I would love to hear your reviews of any of my work yes! I have not received much feedback on my poem ?Earth?s Legacy? I would appreciate a critique of that one.
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Let me get home and I will do just that
Comment from Cycler
I see her, too. Through the gentleness of your thoughts and words.
I think I know what you mean by "she does not want pity" and she wants to talk. I suppose she'd like to be hugged with the embracing warmth and reassurance of sanity - genuine caring.
This song came to my mind, or maybe I heard it after I read you. Any way ... God bless you. And keep writing!
https://youtu.be/c747i2H-UDI
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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I see her, too. Through the gentleness of your thoughts and words.
I think I know what you mean by "she does not want pity" and she wants to talk. I suppose she'd like to be hugged with the embracing warmth and reassurance of sanity - genuine caring.
This song came to my mind, or maybe I heard it after I read you. Any way ... God bless you. And keep writing!
https://youtu.be/c747i2H-UDI
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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David,
The songs you chose are absolutely beautiful. It's good to be back again, though my time is greatly limited. So much going on. All good though.
Thank you so very much for your support of my work. My work is of life and experiences lived and learned.
I am truly honored and humbled over all of your reviews.. again a huge thank you
jimi
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David,
The songs you chose are absolutely beautiful. It's good to be back again, though my time is greatly limited. So much going on. All good though.
Thank you so very much for your support of my work. My work is of life and experiences lived and learned.
I am truly honored and humbled over all of your reviews.. again a huge thank you
jimi
Comment from Mabaker
hi jimi, So good to hear you lovely poetry once more, I miss your great reviews. Many thanks,and best wishes.
If you get two seconds, please have a peep at my continuing saga, Mugs Not As We Know Him.Sincerely Anne
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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hi jimi, So good to hear you lovely poetry once more, I miss your great reviews. Many thanks,and best wishes.
If you get two seconds, please have a peep at my continuing saga, Mugs Not As We Know Him.Sincerely Anne
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Dearest Anne,,I was thinking of you today.,Actually I haven?t missed any of your works, I just haven?t reviewed all I need to. I know I took a long leave. I promise to catch up. I will send you an email. I think I have your email or Facebook. Send it to me in pm. Thank you dear sweet cat lady and phantasmagorical writer!!
Jimi
Comment from TPAC
Not the same, but I know a gent that fell into a sewer treatment tank, sinking under for a period. Nightmares are part of existence whomever realm. All in my opinion.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Not the same, but I know a gent that fell into a sewer treatment tank, sinking under for a period. Nightmares are part of existence whomever realm. All in my opinion.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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TPAC,
Thank you so very much for stopping by to read my work. I am honored. Is there a work you would like me to review?
again thank you
jlsavell
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Wow! This is powerful! I did not see the ending coming until it smacked me right across the face. It was a very good idea not, to let on to where you were going with this extraordinary poem. The line above the title is very appropriate for this piece. The definitions of her; her style, her smile that wasn't there, her lost grace, clutching her purse so tight her knuckles turned white... All of it is engrossing, and carries me along, at the edge of my seat. It's like a book I couldn't put down, I kept going not knowing where it would lead. Robbed of her dignity, power, and grace by the rape. The kind not spoken of. Yes, we see her everywhere, and are maybe not aware, of who she was, and now, who she is. Well written doesn't begin to give credit for this special work. Thank you for sharing. I need not know whether this is fiction or not. It tells a story that deserves to be told.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Wow! This is powerful! I did not see the ending coming until it smacked me right across the face. It was a very good idea not, to let on to where you were going with this extraordinary poem. The line above the title is very appropriate for this piece. The definitions of her; her style, her smile that wasn't there, her lost grace, clutching her purse so tight her knuckles turned white... All of it is engrossing, and carries me along, at the edge of my seat. It's like a book I couldn't put down, I kept going not knowing where it would lead. Robbed of her dignity, power, and grace by the rape. The kind not spoken of. Yes, we see her everywhere, and are maybe not aware, of who she was, and now, who she is. Well written doesn't begin to give credit for this special work. Thank you for sharing. I need not know whether this is fiction or not. It tells a story that deserves to be told.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Jesse James Doty,
This review was so humbling. Your words tell me my work was worth the timidity of deciding how and when I should write and post. I am quite honored.
Thank you very much. Words cannot express my deep gratitude.
Again thank you
Jimi
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Hello Jimi
Yes, your work was well worth writing and posting. Sharing your talented work will help us all to grow.
Jesse
Comment from jdrhye
This is wrapped in the intensity of emotions restrained and open. I felt the fear, the apprehension, sadness and anger. You have done a good job bringing the topic, the victimization and survival instincts to the forefront. A difficult topic to write about but you have managed to give power and a voice to the subject of rape. Intense reading.
J
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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This is wrapped in the intensity of emotions restrained and open. I felt the fear, the apprehension, sadness and anger. You have done a good job bringing the topic, the victimization and survival instincts to the forefront. A difficult topic to write about but you have managed to give power and a voice to the subject of rape. Intense reading.
J
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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jdhrye,
Once again a huge thank you. Today is storming heavily and I hope to not lose my internet. I am home for the rest of the day and will endeavor to get to your port. It has already knocked my internet out twice. Again thank you..
jimi
Comment from Dawn Munro
Okay, Jimi, 'bought time you brought your amazing talent back to FS to share. And yep, I know this gal all too well -- I suspect a lot of us do -- women, that is. There could be more to the story than hashtag 'me too', couldn't it... Much more. Maybe even most of a lifetime...
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Okay, Jimi, 'bought time you brought your amazing talent back to FS to share. And yep, I know this gal all too well -- I suspect a lot of us do -- women, that is. There could be more to the story than hashtag 'me too', couldn't it... Much more. Maybe even most of a lifetime...
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Dawn!!!!!
What am I to say beautiful lady? You are so appreciated by me. I hope you are doing well. Your reviews always brighten my day and humble me. I consider you one of the top notch talents on this site.
Thank you ever so much for your support and belief in me, it means a great deal..again a huge thank you!!!
jimi
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You're very welcome, my friend -- SO well deserved.