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Comment from nancy_e_davis
I really love poetry and I am talking about poetry that is metered and rhymes. It is a challenge to write a poem that is well accepted by the community. I joined FS without any poetic training at all, but because I could rhyme I thought I was a poet. It took help from the community that taught me how to write meter. We don't get a lot of help anymore. I am weak on punctuation. Thanks for the review and stars Bill. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
I really love poetry and I am talking about poetry that is metered and rhymes. It is a challenge to write a poem that is well accepted by the community. I joined FS without any poetic training at all, but because I could rhyme I thought I was a poet. It took help from the community that taught me how to write meter. We don't get a lot of help anymore. I am weak on punctuation. Thanks for the review and stars Bill. Nancy:)
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I just like being funny. My advice is never very helpful.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fun poem Bill, full of clever rhymes about meter and how we poets seem to be hooked on it! I liked your style, best wishes, love. Dolly x
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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
This is a fun poem Bill, full of clever rhymes about meter and how we poets seem to be hooked on it! I liked your style, best wishes, love. Dolly x
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Thanks,Dolly
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. You're so funny. The poem certainly does have a perfect ballad type meter and then the last line just falls flat to emphasize, it's really more about expression what we want to say more than the meter.
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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
Lol. You're so funny. The poem certainly does have a perfect ballad type meter and then the last line just falls flat to emphasize, it's really more about expression what we want to say more than the meter.
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Thanks, lyenochka