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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Bill, that was excellent! I can see a lot of that happening, and I like the idea that our smart phones can give us a zap and get our heart going again. You've really penned this well, I agree with all you say in this poem, fun one it may be, but my goodness, I can really see it all coming. Well done, an excellent read. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
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Bill, that was excellent! I can see a lot of that happening, and I like the idea that our smart phones can give us a zap and get our heart going again. You've really penned this well, I agree with all you say in this poem, fun one it may be, but my goodness, I can really see it all coming. Well done, an excellent read. :)) Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
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Thank you, Sandra
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Thank you, Sandra
Comment from judiverse
Things aren't that bad! Are they? I'm not a President Trump fan. Still, I don't believe he's the end of civilization as we know it. There's plenty of blame to spread around. Anyway, presidents come and go. If other nations have a bad opinion of the U.S. now, let them assume some responsibility. Their problems were not brought on by Trump. I thought your third stanza was the funniest with the references to the smart phone and your car driving you to the hospital. Excellent rhyme and flow in all your stanzas. judi
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Things aren't that bad! Are they? I'm not a President Trump fan. Still, I don't believe he's the end of civilization as we know it. There's plenty of blame to spread around. Anyway, presidents come and go. If other nations have a bad opinion of the U.S. now, let them assume some responsibility. Their problems were not brought on by Trump. I thought your third stanza was the funniest with the references to the smart phone and your car driving you to the hospital. Excellent rhyme and flow in all your stanzas. judi
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
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Just a poem, Judi, with a persona voice.
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You're welcome. judi
Comment from William Ross
I hear you man, great piece with wonderful rhyming and meter as well.Nicely done we can only hope things turn for the better and not get worse. Thanks for the share and have a great day
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I hear you man, great piece with wonderful rhyming and meter as well.Nicely done we can only hope things turn for the better and not get worse. Thanks for the share and have a great day
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Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
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Thanks, William Thanjs, Dolly
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh dear Bill, this is a 'Humbug' write from old Scrooge himself me thinks? He he he, we don't think America stinks at all and it seems that everyone wants to get into America and stay there! He he he. I think you need a tot of brandy and a mince pie to cheer you! He he he, joking aside, a well written piece of news reel, love Dolly x
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Oh dear Bill, this is a 'Humbug' write from old Scrooge himself me thinks? He he he, we don't think America stinks at all and it seems that everyone wants to get into America and stay there! He he he. I think you need a tot of brandy and a mince pie to cheer you! He he he, joking aside, a well written piece of news reel, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
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Thanks, Dolly. Just a poem. All sharp objects are locked away.