Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hmmm, I had no idea that date trees even had thorns, Wendy.
You learn something new everyday...

As usual, great rhyming in an a,a,b,b pattern, coupled with a great story suitable for children of all ages.
Even big kids like me!
Well done...
~Dean :)

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 Comment Written 13-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017

Hmmm, just what is your dark mind planning for seeming innocuous Date trees and their unsuspecting victim? Thanks for the read and review. The encouragement from big kids like you helps to keep me motivated to get the last few Alphabet Kids out of their undies and dressed for the world. - Wendy

reply by Dean Kuch on 13-Jun-2017

You're welcome. :)

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about gardening. Children would love to start their own gardens when they read this poem. Mom can make them pies from their produce.

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 Comment Written 13-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017

Thanks for the encouraging review Sandra. - Wendy