Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Wendy,
This is a great page in your book. The rhyme is great as is the smooth flow. But what stands out is the message. Accept yourself & don't let others bring you down.

Good job on your entry for your book. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017

Thanks for the review, Jan. I am behind on mine by one day but did get the poem in the book. I'm glad you liked it. - Wendy

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Thank you for sharing your 'L' poem and page in your children's book of poetry. I like the rhyme and rhythm and the message of this piece. Well done,
~patty~

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 Comment Written 27-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017

Another review much appreciated. I'm glad you liked the three most important aspects. - Wendy

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem for children. Our lips are one of our most important features, we pout them to kiss and open them wide to scream, but the most important one is when we form them into a smile.

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 Comment Written 27-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017

Thanks for the R & R Sandra, and good morning. Happy writing today. - Wendy