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Comment from Dawn Munro
LOL - well, okay, I can certainly envision this without any effort, although it's a bit of a bizarre sight - are you saying the xylophone is difficult to master? You sure did pick impressive letters for your ABC poem, and rhymed it to boot! Wow. Best of luck. I'm still smiling with pleasure after reading this one and picturing those zebras and mice. :).
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
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LOL - well, okay, I can certainly envision this without any effort, although it's a bit of a bizarre sight - are you saying the xylophone is difficult to master? You sure did pick impressive letters for your ABC poem, and rhymed it to boot! Wow. Best of luck. I'm still smiling with pleasure after reading this one and picturing those zebras and mice. :).
Comment Written 30-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
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Thank you, Dawn, for going with the humor in this. Bill
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Oh, goodness, I hope I didn't offend!
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Not at all. I'm glad you saw the humor I intended. Happy day. Bill
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Oh, that's great. Thanks for letting me know.
Comment from BeasPeas
Ha, ha. I enjoyed this humorous ABC poem. You used all the hard letters here--well not quite--you didn't use "Q." And you made it rhyme. Gives food for thought as who would pick certain instruments such as the xylophone, the tuba or the harp. Marilyn
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Ha, ha. I enjoyed this humorous ABC poem. You used all the hard letters here--well not quite--you didn't use "Q." And you made it rhyme. Gives food for thought as who would pick certain instruments such as the xylophone, the tuba or the harp. Marilyn
Comment Written 29-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Thank you, Marilyn, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements beautifully with spot on conformity to form. I love the section of the alphabet you picked to use - shows real courage and command of vocabulary. I wish you all the best in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully with spot on conformity to form. I love the section of the alphabet you picked to use - shows real courage and command of vocabulary. I wish you all the best in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Thank you, MA, for the terrific and complimentary review. Bill
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ABC poem an one of the easiest instruments to learn to play a tune. A great way to start growing musical talents from an early age.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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A very well-written ABC poem an one of the easiest instruments to learn to play a tune. A great way to start growing musical talents from an early age.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Thank you, Sandra, for chiming in on this one. Bill
Comment from joeruptak
You are to be commended for taking some of the hardest letters to use
the meter and flow is terrific making for a rhythmic read
I wish you the best in the contest I haven't seen any others but this is a vote-getter- good luck
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2016
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You are to be commended for taking some of the hardest letters to use
the meter and flow is terrific making for a rhythmic read
I wish you the best in the contest I haven't seen any others but this is a vote-getter- good luck
Comment Written 28-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2016
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Thank you, joe, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from frogbook
Great rhymes for this inventive entry. Good use of humor. Like that you used these more difficult letters. Great entry for the prompt.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2016
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Great rhymes for this inventive entry. Good use of humor. Like that you used these more difficult letters. Great entry for the prompt.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2016
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Thank you, FB, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from nomi338
Fat chance of any of that happening to me. Which I think is the point. yes you could be good, but you probably won't be. By all means though, try, try and then try again.
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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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Fat chance of any of that happening to me. Which I think is the point. yes you could be good, but you probably won't be. By all means though, try, try and then try again.
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Comment Written 26-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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Thank you, nomi, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from thonnigford09
Surprising! Absolutely surprising. Not much surprises me anymore!!! I love this!!! You're right. Everyone on a team is needed. No clones. Revolution. Thanks and this is a good entry for the contest and I would recommend it. Theresa.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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Surprising! Absolutely surprising. Not much surprises me anymore!!! I love this!!! You're right. Everyone on a team is needed. No clones. Revolution. Thanks and this is a good entry for the contest and I would recommend it. Theresa.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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Thank you, Theresa, for the super review. Bill
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No Problem Bill! Theresa.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hey, even I would pay to see that show, Bill.
So, when does it begin, and where might I catch this act?
Speakin' of acts, I am actually am amazed that you chose the letters you did for this contest.
W, X, Y, and , Z. Four of the most difficult letters to use in this type of poem, much less add rhyme to the mix.
Best of luck to you in the contest, buddy.
Happy New Year,
~Dean
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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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Hey, even I would pay to see that show, Bill.
So, when does it begin, and where might I catch this act?
Speakin' of acts, I am actually am amazed that you chose the letters you did for this contest.
W, X, Y, and , Z. Four of the most difficult letters to use in this type of poem, much less add rhyme to the mix.
Best of luck to you in the contest, buddy.
Happy New Year,
~Dean
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Comment Written 26-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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Thank you, Dean, for taking a look at this. I thought I might as well do the letters X and Z since I wasn't going to dealing with reality. Bill
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Dealing with reality?
Well, that's never much fun, is it? LOL...
My pleasure, Bill.
~Dean :)