Wally Weasel's Stories
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Comment from Mary Wakeford
Haha, Spic n Span, I haven't heard or thought of that product from my childhood for years and am now wondering if it even still manufactured!
I'm going to have to read this to my college aged daughter...she needs an "every Tuesday", at least!
You have a wonderful talent for rhyming while story telling. Another fun read,
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016
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Haha, Spic n Span, I haven't heard or thought of that product from my childhood for years and am now wondering if it even still manufactured!
I'm going to have to read this to my college aged daughter...she needs an "every Tuesday", at least!
You have a wonderful talent for rhyming while story telling. Another fun read,
Comment Written 04-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016
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Thank you so much. High praise, indeed.
I think they still make Spin n Span. Not really sure, though. Used to be a household staple, didn't it? 8-)
Comment from heyjude
Damommy, very well done. I like the artwork, too. It looks like the
way I do mine. Nice rhyming and flows well, too. I like the way this
teaches children to clean their room regularly.
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Damommy, very well done. I like the artwork, too. It looks like the
way I do mine. Nice rhyming and flows well, too. I like the way this
teaches children to clean their room regularly.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016
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Thank you so much. What a nice review. 8-)
Comment from William Ross
Nice on Wally cleaning his room, a good children's poem that may help children keep their room clean. Nicely done, I do like your Wally poems, have a good day
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Nice on Wally cleaning his room, a good children's poem that may help children keep their room clean. Nicely done, I do like your Wally poems, have a good day
Comment Written 04-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016
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Thank you. I appreciate your support. I'm so glad you enjoy the Wally stories. 8-)
Comment from sage17611
This is a cute children's story. I think this story will help children appreciate tidying their space, and making it a fun activity instead of a chore. Your poem can definitely be use as educational reading for children. The flow is good with smooth rhyming, good job with this write.
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This is a cute children's story. I think this story will help children appreciate tidying their space, and making it a fun activity instead of a chore. Your poem can definitely be use as educational reading for children. The flow is good with smooth rhyming, good job with this write.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2016
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind remarks. 8-)
Comment from joannakruk
A great poem that would be ideal for a young audience. I can see children being inspired to evoke the cleanliness advocated by wally. A great picture to add value
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A great poem that would be ideal for a young audience. I can see children being inspired to evoke the cleanliness advocated by wally. A great picture to add value
Comment Written 04-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016
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Thank you for the lovely review. 8-)
Comment from RoostyNester
A very nice kids poem of Wally cleaning his room. A great method of teaching for a child. Very well done in style and words. I liked your poem.
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A very nice kids poem of Wally cleaning his room. A great method of teaching for a child. Very well done in style and words. I liked your poem.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2016
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Thank you. I appreciate your comments. 8-)
Comment from GoodHearted Woman
Wally is our shining star. I liked the dust cloths on his tail the best. I always thought, and still think, that with you doing your own artwork, this would really be an easy book to get published and 'out there'. Did you ever mention something about a series? In which case (if you did) you'd want it pretty much finished by the time it went to press (is that the correct jargon??) Anyway, damommy, you've got a real winner here with Wally, something that both parents and kids are going to appreciate. Haven't heard much from you lately--didn't know if that was good or bad. Good in a way that you might be working hard on a writing project. Talk later. Marcia
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Wally is our shining star. I liked the dust cloths on his tail the best. I always thought, and still think, that with you doing your own artwork, this would really be an easy book to get published and 'out there'. Did you ever mention something about a series? In which case (if you did) you'd want it pretty much finished by the time it went to press (is that the correct jargon??) Anyway, damommy, you've got a real winner here with Wally, something that both parents and kids are going to appreciate. Haven't heard much from you lately--didn't know if that was good or bad. Good in a way that you might be working hard on a writing project. Talk later. Marcia
Comment Written 04-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016
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Thank you for your lovely review. And the compliments! You've made my day.
I haven't been on FS for a while. I've been feeling a little puny (I have lupus). Things are looking up, though, and I want to get busy on my Wally pictures. I think I'll put it on CreateSpace.
Thank you for your encouragement and support. It means a lot. 8-)
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Good for you, Wally. Nice job with your self-portrait, too. You're setting a good example for kids everywhere. You should be proud. :)
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Good for you, Wally. Nice job with your self-portrait, too. You're setting a good example for kids everywhere. You should be proud. :)
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2016
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Thank you. What a nice compliment. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. 8-)
Comment from barkingdog
Wally sets a good example for children. Work before play.
Excellent rhyme and as always a clever story.
I liked the way he carried his dust cloths:
'the dustpan in his right hand,
and the dust cloths on his tail.'
:) ellen
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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016
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Wally sets a good example for children. Work before play.
Excellent rhyme and as always a clever story.
I liked the way he carried his dust cloths:
'the dustpan in his right hand,
and the dust cloths on his tail.'
:) ellen
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
His hands were full, so his tail came in handy. LOL. 8-)
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I like your art work, too.
Also, appealing to children.
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Thank you. It's pretty primitive, but I'm SLOWLY getting a little better. I'm glad you complimented it because I was a little hesitant to post it. 8-)
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It's the primitive--as you call it--look that makes it charming. Polished isn't always the best.
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Bless your heart. Thank you. 8-)
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Bless your heart. Thank you. 8-)
Comment from His Grayness
This is a very cute and I'm sure, effective way of helping children respect their responsibilities for personal cleanliness. The poem is perfectly rhymed and very nicely packaged so it fully deserves six stars. I cannot offer any advice to this author to improve this work and thank her for the joy of reading it! HIS GRAYNESS
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This is a very cute and I'm sure, effective way of helping children respect their responsibilities for personal cleanliness. The poem is perfectly rhymed and very nicely packaged so it fully deserves six stars. I cannot offer any advice to this author to improve this work and thank her for the joy of reading it! HIS GRAYNESS
Comment Written 04-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016
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I must thank you for such a wonderful review. I appreciate it very much.
Most of all, I'm so happy you enjoyed reading about Wally.
Thank you, again. 8-)