Comment from Mama Fish

Excellent

Nice job on a poem for this contest about air. The picture compliments the poem well also. I remember blowing these into the air when I was a child.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016

Thank you very much for the lovely words of encouragement and support. They are greatly appreciated.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine 3-5-3 entry for the contest
with exact syllables
Good example of wind in the breath
that blows the dandelion seeds
Excellent picture to match poem
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016

Thank you very much for the lovely words of encouragement and support. They are greatly appreciated.

Comment from jandeck

Excellent

This air poem is beautifully descriptive. I love the comparison of the actual seeds to the dreams and wishes of those who wish upon them. Very uplifting!

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016

Thank you very much for the lovely words of encouragement and support. They are greatly appreciated.

Comment from RoostyNester

Excellent

How many times have we as children blown the spikes off these? These were childhood memories. Your poem is very nice. Liked the picture used to illustrate.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016

Thank you very much for the lovely words of encouragement and support. They are greatly appreciated.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your air poem. I like that it can read literally as wind blowing & figuratively as planting seeds of the future by taking that important step.

Good job with the syllable count. Best wishes in the contest Jan

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016

Thank you very much for the lovely words of encouragement and support. They are greatly appreciated.

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Hello Poet Contender;
-I have read them all and come down to a decision to vote for you because it is the best that I have read out of all 12 and it really deals with air in actuality every time one every time one blows on a then the line puffball it releases seads for the near future. A brilliant concept with an exceptional picture to go with the poem. Very well thought out.
-I am going to sit this one out however if you would like to read the one I have written it is as follows:
breath I take
is only for you as
I breathe love
-Still I wish you good luck in the contest and have a good one and take care.
Alex

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 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2016

Thank you kind sir. I really appreciate the encouragement even though I probably will not get any votes LOL. I enjoyed yours as it was a warm fuzzy kind of read which is always nice to experience.

reply by krys123 on 02-Aug-2016

Hang in there my friend and you are welcome and you never know when it comes to voting.
Alex

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Well, this is just magical!!!!! I love it! Whimsy and wonder, and just pure awesomeness!!!! Surely a winner here....blessings....

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 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2016

Thank you VERY much! I am so happy you think it worthy. I doubt I'll get votes but what the heck LOL .... you don't know unless you try.

reply by Irish Rain on 01-Aug-2016

I personally think it's the best!