Comment from Julie Dascoli

Exceptional

I love wally and his antics. the whole piece rhymes perfectly, it flows with ease. I love it's sing song rhythm and its joy. Even the tragedy at the end is overcome positively which is perfect for little ones. I would defiantly read this to my kinder kids. cheers Julie D.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016

Thank you so much. Wow! Six stars! I'm honored. I hope your kinder kids like Wally, too. Please let me know.

Again, thank you for your gracious review. 8-)

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Yvonne,

I thought that was Wally's sketching? What's going on?
You spoiled it for me! You want my honest opinion? lol
Well, it looks like a weasel painted it.

I found your poem really well written with a great flow
and story line. What a pity that he took such a big
spill though.

Your imagery was beautiful and I felt like I was right
there with Wally experiencing the lovely mountain
scene.

I'm glad Wally has not retired...I think he is much
younger than you:) No need to retire. (Wally that is)

Linda

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016

It's supposed to look like a weasel painted it.

Thank you for a lovely review. I'll tell Wally you like his painting. LOL

Thanks a lot, truly! 8-)

reply by AnnaLinda on 25-Apr-2016

I know...just teasing:)
You did good

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016

Is it that bad????

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

I love Wally. I love your drawings. You have so much to give to this little creature. The adventures of wally are so fun. You are a delightful creature too. Thank you . keep writing wally stories and drawing.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016

Thank you. I appreciate your opinion and your comments. Thank you for the support. 8-)

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

I like Wally. This is another good poem, Yvonne. I enjoyed his trip to the mountains. I really think you are doing a good job on this series of poems. I always look forward to the next one

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016

Thank you. You've been a true friend and a lot of support to me. 8-)

reply by Douglas Paul on 24-Apr-2016

I really do like your Wally poems, my friend

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016

Thank you so much. 8-)

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

Wally's getting himself into strife again. I'm not si sure if the furry thing he saw was something that might chase him, or whether he might want to chase it! I know what Cheezel would do - he has a big thing for rabbits!

A small thing, but in a couple of places in stanzas 2&3 you use past tense, when all the rest is in present tense - should be a fairly easy fix...

Favourite lines:
He's lying flat, his head a-spin, poor Wally's seeing stars.
'Cause just as he flew over them, he hit the handlebars.

Steve

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016

Thank you so much for your input. I will look at it again. I like those two lines, too. 8-)

Comment from tony bronk

Excellent

I once took a spill over my handle bars, too, but I seemed to be injured more than Wally! I also paint like Wally, maybe we could get together one day and share ideas? Good write. Tony

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 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016

I paint like him, too. Wally might be hurt worse than I think. He doesn't complain. LOL

Thank you. 8-)

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi DaMommy,

This is another really interesting poem about Wally Weasel. You sure are great at writing them. Lately my poetry doesn't seem to be getting hardly any reviews. Oh well, such is life.

Kat

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 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016

I think it's because of the frenzy over Prince's death. Things will pick up, I'm sure. Thank you for your review. 8-)

reply by MizKat on 25-Apr-2016

It's too bad about Prince dying. Have you heard anymore about him? Why he died and so on. Kat

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016

I heard about his death but nothing else. It's sad when anyone dies.

reply by MizKat on 25-Apr-2016

It is sad, unless they're on their way to heaven. Kat