Comment from Unspoken94

Exceptional

This is a long piece and yet you have maintained an excellent rhyme scheme
and pace. I am always amazed at those of you who can do this. This
is clearly an exceptional piece and I plan to read it to my granddaughter
tonight before bedtime. -bill

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016

You have been most generous with your stars. I thank you so much. I'm flattered that you're reading it to your granddaughter. I'd like to know how she like it.

Thank you. 8-)

Comment from Mary Wakeford

Excellent

I am very much in love with your little Wally. These are the sweetest things to read and enjoy just picturing the scene. Truth be told, Wally rides a bike much like m'wa.
I crashed and burned coming off a mountain road once and it wasn't pretty. I was very lucky to get away with a concussion and a permanent indention to my thigh from the handlebar! No paints or pots involved :) Excellent rhyming and story telling once again. Brava!

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016

Thank you so much! You always say the nicest and most flattering things. Bless your heart.

Have you ridden your bike since? You know what they say about getting back on the horse, so to speak.

Thanks, again. 8-)

Comment from Joyce Long

Excellent

This is a cute little poem about Wally Weasel that children should enjoy. I'm pleased that when he went downhill he had control of his bike. Very well written, but stanza three doesn't rhyme. Thanks for sharing.
Joyce 04-20-16

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016

I'll take a look. Thank you for reviewing. 8-)

Comment from djeckert

Excellent

So cute. Did the little weasel figure out how to shift the gears, I am guessing. Such an entertaining little story that has a great rhythm and pace. Kids will love it for sure. Nice work

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016

Wally's bike is pretty simple. It doesn't have gears. That's something he would probably have given up on. LOL

Thank you for a very nice review. 8-)

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

Great chapter ing that my little grandkids are so gonna love. You have a most unique and truly magnificent way of writing. Please never stop. Readers need you and I do too.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016

Well, thank you so much. I don't want Wally to outstay his welcome, so to speak.

I'm happy you're enjoying these. I hope the children do, too. Let me know, please. 8-)

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

This is another delightful poem. I love Wally's escapades. The rhyme and flow in this is excellent and it reads very smoothly. You should promote this one - people will enjoy it

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016

Thank you. 8-)

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Yvonne,

You have written another really adorable poem of Wally's adventures.
It was a joy to read and also see his red bike there. I like how you
have him get up after his fall with a positive attitude. That's a great
thing to teach children.

You have a nice rhythm, flow and rhyme in this as well. I see you
left us at the end...waiting for the next adventure.

Very sweet,
Linda

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016

Sitting on the edge of your seat, aren't you? LOL LOL

Thank you for a very lovely review. I appreciate it so much. 8-)

Comment from jane.fallon

Excellent

Excellent. I really enjoyed reading this.

There is just one word that worried me. Instead of "weeble", I think "wiggle" would be a better word.

Very well done and good luck.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016

Well, he's actually doing a weeble/wobble on his bike. LOL

I'm so happy that you enjoyed this. Thank you. 8-)

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

Your little weasel guy has gotten into my heart. He is amazing and I love him. I truly would read this to my grand children. Please find a way to let this little guy be in children's books around the world.


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 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016

I'm working on getting Wally out there. I'm happy to know you like Wally. Let me know what your grandchildren think of him, please.

Thank you for a most complimentary review. I appreciate it so much. Thank you for your support. 8-)