Comment from Teri7

Exceptional

This is a six star poem about my favorite little weasel. I love the way you describe Wally and his surroundings. He is a very adventurous little weasel. You used very good descriptive wording and I love the art work. Hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016

Isn't the painting something? It's SweetLinda's work.

Thank you for a lovely review. I'm so happy you're enjoying Wally escapades. He really puts his all in his painting. I have to see that he keeps one foot on the floor. 8-)

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

I can't wait to read this to my grandchildren as they are big fans of yours. You are so very talented and gifted. I know that as does the little ones because they tell me. A splendid addition.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016

It makes me so happy to hear they like it. That's what I was aiming for. Thank you for telling me!

He really puts his all in his painting. I have to see that he keeps one foot on the floor.

Thank you for your review, and for your support. I appreciate both so much. 8-)

reply by foxangie123 on 18-Apr-2016

All my pleasure Hun.

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

Wally's back and in his element again. The words flow nicely with great rhythm and rhyme. I like the ending you have given this, bringing out Wally's sensitive side - it is so easy to write ourselves into a corner, isn't it?

Clever touch with the artwork, too.

Steve

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016

Yes, it is. But Wally helps with that. LOL

He really puts his all in his painting. I have to see that he keeps one foot on the floor.

Thank you for this lovely review. 8-)

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

What a great little story in a fun witty poem would make a n excellent little short book for children great job on this. Wonderful read and write

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016

Thank you. Isn't the painting something? It's SweetLinda's photograph.

I'm so happy you like Wally and his escapades. 8-)

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Damommy, This is such an endearing story you have told in your poem. The rhyming is perfect, and you paint it all in vivid colours. This is great for children and adults alike. I love it. All the best. Ulla:)

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016

Thank you. I'm glad you like it. 8 -) Thank you for your review.

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

Damommy, this is such an excellent children's story - Wally Weasel Paints the Beach. You have rhymed this poem perfectly and told a story that was easy to visualise and upbeat with its mention of colors - orange, red, yellow, purple, gold, blue.
Just a comment on this line -
4th stanza, third line - "This might just be the masterpiece he's always thought he'd do". I thought this line didn't sound quite right. Perhaps it would be better as -
'This might just be the masterpiece (he) always thought he'd do'.

Such a creative touch and I also like the hidden story (the one that appeared in my own eyes) of - it doesn't matter what you look like, the picture you paint will always be special as we all are. Thank you for sharing this most enjoyable and inspirational read.~DD

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016

Thank you so much. You've made me happy. I'll get to that correction right now. 8-)

reply by PoemsOfDD on 18-Apr-2016

Pleasure :-)~DD

Comment from Mary Wakeford

Excellent

Another great action packed Wally the Weasel field trip described with such a flair for bring this little imaginary scene to life. The imagery compliments the work well and my only suggestion for improving it would be to set your background color to something that would lend to the ocean or beach. Well done!

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 Comment Written 18-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016

I thought about changing the color.

I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Thank you so much. 8-)

Comment from BruceMiller

Exceptional

What a great poem about an impossible happening: a weasel with an easel. I just said it was great, but that was an understatement. It was understandable, it was entertaining, and it made me feel good, too. Loverly (to quote Eliza)

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016

Why, thank you very much for a lovely and generous review. I'm so happy you like it. I appreciate your kind comments. 8-)

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi DaMommy, this is a wonderfully penned children's [poem and a great addition to this well-written series, wonderful rhyming with great alliteration, the rhythm is excellent and so is the flow, a very captivating poem from start to finish my friend.

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 Comment Written 18-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016

Thank you for your review. You always say the nicest things, and it keeps me going. I appreciate your support. 8-)

reply by Eric1 on 18-Apr-2016

You are very welcome my friend.