Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hahaha...and I thought I was messed up in the head, Steve, lol. Well, I am, really, but that's beside the point. The real point here is that this schizophrenic psycho is not only hearing voices inside his own head, but he is also answering them. That is never--and I do mean NEV-VER a good sign, heh-heh.

Best of luck to you in the 100-150 word story Contest.
~Dean

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015

Thank you for the awesome review my friend! My mind just might be a little damaged as well lol! When an inspiring moment hits me at work, I catch the other employee's staring at me. When I make eye contact, they ask if I am ok lol! "What do you mean?" I ask. I surely love these moments!
God bless!

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

I don't know how you can tell a story this clever in under 150 words. I know I wouldn't even try. You establish the insanity very adroitly with the tugging at his collar, then slamming his fist on the table and removing his shirt. Of course its a dead giveaway when he answers his imaginary phone.

Good luck, Steve. And do have a happy, safe, New Year.

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 Comment Written 31-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015

Thank you for the awesome review Jay, I love dabbling with the short story restraints.
God bless and Happy, healthy, safe and prosperous New Year to you and yours.
Steve