Christmas Without You
missing my sons and inlaws16 total reviews
Comment from Unspoken94
You convey loss. I can feel your grief. Christmas has changed for you and the MS doesn't help. But you also have a conveyed a faith that holds you up and a grandson who represents the future. You have a new way to journey to Bethlehem this year. But you have to let go of the old so that you can grab hold of the new. Merry Christmas. -Bill
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2015
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You convey loss. I can feel your grief. Christmas has changed for you and the MS doesn't help. But you also have a conveyed a faith that holds you up and a grandson who represents the future. You have a new way to journey to Bethlehem this year. But you have to let go of the old so that you can grab hold of the new. Merry Christmas. -Bill
Comment Written 18-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2015
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Thank you Bill for your uplifting review. Merry Christmas my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from c_lucas
Christmas Time is family time. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Wishing you and yours a very Merry Christmas.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2015
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Christmas Time is family time. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Wishing you and yours a very Merry Christmas.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2015
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Thank you Charlie. I wish the same for you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Laidy
I thought that this was a great write but it had me tearing up because the tone of the story was so heartfelt with sorrow and memory, and the feelings of missing. I really liked your share and I hope that you find something new to make a new tradition with. Smile. Hugs.
-Laidy
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2015
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I thought that this was a great write but it had me tearing up because the tone of the story was so heartfelt with sorrow and memory, and the feelings of missing. I really liked your share and I hope that you find something new to make a new tradition with. Smile. Hugs.
-Laidy
Comment Written 17-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2015
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Thank you for the great review and six stars. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Veronicai
I like the fact that you give so much importance to family for Christmas. I could feel the passion that you have for your loved ones which you owe all to the love Jesus gives you. Check out grammar in a few sentences. For example - It was Tom. me and the three boys. You need to make sure your commas in in there. It was Tom, me, and the three boys. I would also make sure I know when to use a semi colon verses a comma. For example - I would always have my favorite Christmas CD's playing in the car, looking out the window watching the snow as it would glide down. Instead of a comma between car and looking I would put a semi colon because a semi colon separates two different ideas in the same sentence.
Great Writing!!
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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2015
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I like the fact that you give so much importance to family for Christmas. I could feel the passion that you have for your loved ones which you owe all to the love Jesus gives you. Check out grammar in a few sentences. For example - It was Tom. me and the three boys. You need to make sure your commas in in there. It was Tom, me, and the three boys. I would also make sure I know when to use a semi colon verses a comma. For example - I would always have my favorite Christmas CD's playing in the car, looking out the window watching the snow as it would glide down. Instead of a comma between car and looking I would put a semi colon because a semi colon separates two different ideas in the same sentence.
Great Writing!!
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Comment Written 17-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2015
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Thank you for the review. Hugs, Teri
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Your Welcome
Feel free to read and review my story too.
It's called One Night Before Christmas by Gladys Infante.
Comment from fafa
A big happiness is to spend the Christmasin family, you describe it with manyelegance and with affection, a lot ofcongratulations in the Christmas and endof year,
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2015
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A big happiness is to spend the Christmasin family, you describe it with manyelegance and with affection, a lot ofcongratulations in the Christmas and endof year,
Comment Written 17-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2015
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Thank you for the great review. It was wonderful times I hope to see again. Hugs, Teri
Comment from patcelaw
Teri, this is a lovely Christmas story. All of us probably have a special story or two in my mental filing cabinets. We just need to bring them out and polish them up to bring cheer to others. You story does bring me cheer. Good luck in the contest. Patricia
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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2015
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Teri, this is a lovely Christmas story. All of us probably have a special story or two in my mental filing cabinets. We just need to bring them out and polish them up to bring cheer to others. You story does bring me cheer. Good luck in the contest. Patricia
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Comment Written 17-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2015
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Thank you my friend. I do miss those times and hope we see them again. Hugs, Teri