Muffett
Lucy's Review of Little Miss Muffett11 total reviews
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Plenty of humor written into this well penned piece.
Definitely comes across as being written by a child.
Asks the questions a youngster would ask.
All the "whats and whys".
Such as "what are curds and whey anyway?"
Then changes horses in mid-stream, the comment about spiders can not sit down, just like a child would do.
Should be a good contest entry.
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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2015
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Plenty of humor written into this well penned piece.
Definitely comes across as being written by a child.
Asks the questions a youngster would ask.
All the "whats and whys".
Such as "what are curds and whey anyway?"
Then changes horses in mid-stream, the comment about spiders can not sit down, just like a child would do.
Should be a good contest entry.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2015
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Thanks, Brett, for your comments. They are exactly the type I need!!!
Ogden